work on making the nurse hotter. ie: use thinner lines for her eyes, nose, and mouth. fix the overhanging breast and strange bikini lines. and why is her hand a heart? clean it up and spend some time adjusting your line weights and you've got yourself a 5.
yea I know this looks pretty bad... I really rushed to get my 2 submissions in for the deadline... but perhaps there will be another version of this in the near future :)
Teeth are very hard to illustrate without making it look like the person is a smoker.
That's why i stay away from that stuff.
And it looks like there's an alcove under that left breast.
regardless...great idea.