May There Be Peace...
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Jan 14 '04
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may peace there on be earth
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Reminds me of the t-shirts they sell on Haight street. I don't thik the Peace movement is going very well...
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Just to avoid confusion: You have to read it from left to right (as with everytrhing) not from top to down...
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I wish everybody the same thing but it's not a strong design
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It's a good message, but lacks some punch or drama. But perhaps that's not what you're going for.
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Thx for the Comments,
As for "explanation" of the design. I was going for a subtle look, not that punchy, more like whispering the message, instead of shouting it out loud. I chose to put Gandhi on as he is the best example of resolving a conflict the non-violent way. |
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i know you had to alter the letterspacing to make the two lines fit into the same amount of space, but it really doesn't work for me. i think it would be better if you kept the spacing of the top line for both lines and made them flush right, so the bottom line would stick out a bit on the left side. also, i'd make "peace" and "earth" gray, and "on" black. i do like it though. (4)
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i dont really like the extra dove on the right, the dove in the letters is enough, in my opinion
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