I have wings and they will open.
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Jun 11 '08
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ginetteginette on Jun 11 '08 this is just like those t-shirts you get from those booths in the mall, for your grandma or #1 dad.
i have never ever seen this much type on a threadless submission before. |
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ginetteginette on Jun 11 '08 this is like one of those tees you find in those mall booths where you can get something for your grandma or your #1 dad.
also, i have never ever seen that much type on a threadless submission before. |
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I would prefer if it had that Footprints story on it. Enough people know that one that I wouldn't have to stand there forever every time someone wanted to read the 3 paragraphs on my shirt.
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I love the poem. Hoever, it's too much for a t-shirt. I think that Tees should be able to be read and understood very quikly. Otherwise you've got people standing there, staring at your top for a few minutes reading it.
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ummmm...lose the text?
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The wings look kind of like the diseased lungs they show kids to scare them away from cigarettes.
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Atheists?
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The "Remember, be nice!" thing is killing me
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Uhhhh, I thought this was going to be a statement about how smoking is bad for you and then it went all god on me.
Is this submission a joke? Doesn't seem like a threadless type tee or is it just me? |
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These comments are making me wonder if I should rethink my design with the entire text of War and Peace on it.
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I think this design is a parody of religious fridge magnets. Also, I think the "wings" are like those psychological ink blot tests, because I've been staring at them for a few minutes now trying to figure out what they remind me of. Furry lung covers?
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WHOA.
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probably the worst design i have seen so far!
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There are an awful lot of 'I's in that poem... it comes off as extremely pretentious. Way too much wording for a shirt, way too religious, not even in any meaningful way because the poem essentially says the same thing in twenty different ways, and the 'wings', I agree, look like smoker's lungs. Yuck.
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I agree that's too much print for one tee. It would be better if you could shorten it to one phrase. But I like the look of the wings.
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diseased lungs :D
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rodrigobhz on Jun 12 '08 ew. sorry pal.
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I would buy a shirt with the entire text of war and peace on it, as long as it looked the The Great Animal Hunt. As per this shirt, not only does the poems have a lot of "I"s, but it saying the God strikes me as a little strange. whats wrong with just God?
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I too thought the wings looked like smoker's lungs
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