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by jasonwave
my second submission..

just play with gradients.

hope you guys love it



cheers!!!
the vandals
the vandals on Jun 09 '08
v nice jason... $5
jasonwave
jasonwave on Jun 10 '08
thanks the vandals!!!

cheers!!
darlingsdoll
darlingsdoll on Jun 10 '08
some colour elements seem a little bit odd to me (example: her earring may be more suitable in red?) but only details.

I like this VERY much :D



(sorry if you can't understand me, I'm not really good in English)
brazengal
brazengal on Jun 10 '08
Truly beautiful...but...I would not buy it because it glorifies/encourages smoking.
MZahradnicek
MZahradnicek on Jun 10 '08
It doesn't glorify smoking. The girl in the smoke looks pregnant to me because of the placement of the bottom left reddish/pink line. That was the first thing I thought, then I realized that was probably not your intention. Great design.
jasonwave
jasonwave on Jun 10 '08
thanks for the commets guys!!!!
moonglows
moonglows on Jun 10 '08
It's beautiful.



I don't mind that she's smoking, but I would make the cigarette tinner.



Still, $5
murgles
murgles on Jun 10 '08
Nice artwork!
Amoronspeaking
Amoronspeaking on Jun 10 '08
Great artwork...
redmage
redmage on Jun 10 '08
nice artwork but it wouldnt apeal to me because of its very clear guy/girl romance. you instantly cut out people with a different sexual orientation.
turbolucy
turbolucy on Jun 11 '08
^anytime a loving couple is depicted, it shouldn't ruin the romantic idea for any couple, no matter what their orientation is. i dig this design - nice job!
EvieMcLeavie
EvieMcLeavie on Jun 11 '08
I like it, except that she looks like she is smoking a cigar. Otherwise, great!
polaresque
polaresque on Jun 11 '08
not bad
visitinghours
visitinghours on Jun 11 '08
The woman in the smoke looks pregnant because of the swirl near the bottom. And her arms make her look like she's supporting her back because of it. Unless that's what you were going for? Otherwise pretty nice design.
applenoggin
applenoggin on Jun 12 '08
I think it does glorify smoking, which I do not like and the smoke lady looks pregnant. Now the shirt is saying to me "Smoke cigars, you'll be pregnant, in love, happy, and smoking"



Your artwork is really pretty and I like the layout of the shirt.
Captain Tetanus
Captain Tetanus on Jun 12 '08
yeah, I couldn't wear it either. I hate smoking, but i's a nice design. Funny that she's smoking that big stogie. Not sure how to spell stogie, never had to write it before.
gsus8myfetus666
gsus8myfetus666 on Jun 12 '08
great design, but i dont like the cigar or earrings; they seem too jennifer lopez-ish. and a girl smoking a cigar seems kind of nasty (NO OFFENSE, to any cigar smoking ladies!). Maybe a girly cigarette would make her more feminine, and a different color or style of earrings, in my opinion. 5$
sophrina_sphinx
sophrina_sphinx on Jun 12 '08
i wish i could blow smoke rings like that...lovely design, $5
txcait05
txcait05 on Jun 12 '08
darlingsdoll

You're english is very good so kudos on that! but in america, gold hoops are always out of this world popular, but I can see how it would blend in with the color of the shirt.

I love this shirt $5
ckyrckr
ckyrckr on Jun 12 '08
i love the top design, it sets up for a light, dreamy kind of sense, but i feel that the figure on the bottom gives it too much weight, and drags down and takes away too much attention from the design. you have a lot of potential though.
inoeimgood
inoeimgood on Jun 12 '08
pretty! (:
laurenthelucky
laurenthelucky on Jun 13 '08
i didnt know anyone smoked cigars like cigarettes
kerriebaker
kerriebaker on Jun 14 '08
beautiful

although i hate smoking, and i think that ruins everything
hockal1215
hockal1215 on Jun 14 '08
Love the design, but I would change the cigar. Swap it out for a cigarette. Something smaller. That big cigar just makes her seem a bit masculine.
rogerc00
rogerc00 on Jun 15 '08
Is she suppsed to be pregnant, was that your intention?



The notion of a cigar being masculine seems a little sexist, although maybe she is smoking a "masculine" tobacco product because the it reminds her of him...
muzikenergy
muzikenergy on Jun 16 '08
I think this design is beautiful! I would DEFINITELY buy it if she were smoking a cigarette instead of a cigar.
Inorganik
Inorganik on Jun 16 '08
is that a stogey??
CameronMB
CameronMB on Jun 16 '08
Sorry, I'm not gay enough to wear this shirt. And I say that as someone who is gayer than you might think.
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