Interesting use of type. The "I'M" is a little difficult to read, but that may be fine for some...
It feels a little bland colorwise... at least another shade of gray or some more variation in line could be just enough to push it that little bit. If you do add another color, just don't make it be bright pink or turquoise blue... Either one of those would be too predictable for a design that takes from 80s design aesthetics.
It's looking good tho! Just needs that extra push!