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Oh silly silly worm. Should someone tell him? I guess he will find out for himself in the end.
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Haha, that's hilarious! Very creative! I almost want to see it in color, not just whatever color the shirt is, you know? Like, I don't know if I like it being transparent.
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With the placement low like that, I could see this working as a maternity shirt. For the rest of us, I'd move the design up.
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love it! i think it would've worked better with no caption. just a big cheesy "how you doin" grin says it all. things often work better when people figure out the meaning on their own.
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nice design and idea, but i think it should be moved up a bit and maybe if the dotted lines were made thinner or something it would fit in better.
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Thanks to all of you who voted. I wish I could have gotten some of these useful ideas during the critiquing process. Maybe I am not leaving it in Critique mode long enough.
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i love the combination of the sketch-like image of the apple with the dotted-line, i agree with all the other comments though about moving it up. If not it would make even a stick look fat lol
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