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i like the central placement and the whole idea :) i would just make that design bigger :D
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I think just the typewriter itself would look cool. Not a fan of the type though.
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Isn't the type the point?
I like either placement, but I'm leaning towards the lower one. |
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take away the words, and the lines on the paper.
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It's fine the way it is; I'm leaning towards front and center.
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no lines on the paper..cuz no one really puts like looseleaf in typewriters.
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no one here is ancient enough to know what kind of paper went in typewriters. Nice job :)
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if you are going to say such a bold statement it needs to be front and center ;)
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I love the type writer
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I agree with nakedpagan. But take away the blue lines :)
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get rid of blue lines... center placement... 5!
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love it!!
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get rid of blue lines...center placement...
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On the corner
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its perfect. im digging the bottom on though :] definitely.
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I like the concept, but im not sure about the style drawing of the typewriter
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It will be better without the blue line.. Lines are to make sure you stay writing in the same direction.. Seems a bit useless for a typewriter doesn't it?? =P
Otherwise, cool concept! |
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Get rid of the type. I love the typewriter though
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bottom left is perfect
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No-- keep the type! And bottom left is nice! One remark though, did you trace the typewriter?? Needs to be cleaner for a $5.
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What does everyone have against text on tees? If there were no text on some of the tees a lot of people are saying, "NO TEXT NO TEXT JUST DESIGN", they wouldn't even make sense. Like without text on this shirt it would just be a typewriter on a shirt. And it's like, ".......... Okaaaaaaay."
The design is all right, but I'd like it better on a different colour than white. And I do agree that the lines on the paper should be gone. |
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cute
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cute
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sorry double click
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i like the lower one ;D and definitely keep the text on it!
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love it!
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I like the concept, just not the design of the type writer so much.
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I like the design, but agree with those who have suggested removal of the blue lines and text. In this case, the simpler the better.
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bigger!
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love it! front and center looks best in my opinion, and definitely get rid of the blue lines (I could go either way on the text). The typewriter looks great, come on guys, typewriters aren't supposed to be digitally perfect--that's kind of the point. You're missing the typewriter spirit.
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center!!
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