“THE GREAT STANDOFF” ……… enough said….

My first T design to be placed in the running……..enjoy!

made me smile love it!

The exclamation points and their expressions don't make it seem like a standoff. When I saw standoff, I thought sort of Western movie, showdown look. I like the idea, but it needs some work.

and to make it even more of a standoff, they need to have some sort of glaring look with their arms at their side as if they're about to draw.
spectacular idea!!!

no exclamation points. make one of them sweating

Great idea but same with everyone elses 5

I think they have already drawn from the way I look at it. The rock has a rock, the paper has paper, and the scissors has scissors. They're at a "standoff" or stalemate.

I think it is cute 5$

Great Job as always!!!

I agree no exclamation marks but it's a great idea.

I agree, no exclamation marks and it would be perfect!

I would say no exclamations..
unless you are going to put the design lower on the shirt and say put a fist above the rock and a hand in scissor shape and have the scissors with an exclamation mark and sweating buckets ;)

i love it, love the colour!! $5!

I could see it without the exclamations (or maybe smaller). It would be about 5 seconds in Illustrator to take them out. I kind of went back and fourth on it and decided to keep them in the end only to show they are at a standoff… and shocked that they were at a draw seeing as they each threw down the home team (that is why I placed the brows high with the pupils centered with a shocked look. I like the sweat idea also, which could have been a cool way to show the emotions without the exclamations…but then I might have had to change the title to “the Great showdown” and my thought process would have been different when drawing it from the start. But in the end that is what I like most about art…it is all up to the end viewer. Thanks for the comments and if you can I have one below I am working on that I would like to get as much feedback as I can before I submit.


http://www.threadless.com/critique/21808/DEMISE_OF_MR_FLAMINGO

the rock is really coollll...

maybe make the exclamations less prominent, right now being big and red is quite distracting.... also, w/o jchyr pointing it out i totally missed their hand gestures. bigger hands maybe?
otherwise, neat

clever lol 4

Super cute!

its cute, but it doesn't look like a standoff to me either. It kinda looks like they have gas.

I'll surely buy that in grey! Hope it gets printed!

Real cool. Ya, get rid of the exclamation marks or make them smaller

I LOVE this design. I hope they print it.