I'd like it better if their faces were a bit more varied and if it wasn't all so yellow. Otherwise, the idea is nice - but try and figure out more what the punchline is. Maybe one could be holding his head in his hands? I dunno. Nice attempt and drawing skill.
I think the joke needs a tad more to it, perhaps seeing these guys through a window and a women being asked "which one hit your car mam?", but the rendering of the dummies themselves are amazing.
Where were you when this was in critique F'awsome? I had considered the whole granny in the line up scenario but I wanted to keep it simple and put the viewer behind the glass window and let them decide who did the crime - still thanks for you and all your feedback 2 date...I hope there's more!
Yeah, I'm not a big critique dude unless someone points in that direction. Sorry man! lol. I'm more of a "try to give helpful hints for a possible re-sub later one" dude! Also, if you ever wanna collab on something I'd love to with ya, just email me at frickinawesome@gmail.com and we'll start something awesome!!!