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If Only You Were Closer

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May 27 '08
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2.13 from 1,481 votes
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rodrigobhz
   rodrigobhz on May 27 '08
hahaha, i like the idea but i don't now 'bout the colors...
Spokey
Spokey on May 27 '08
Really? Well the colors can always be changed if it gets picked!! Vote kids! =)
mello44
mello44 on May 27 '08
i adore this!!
MZahradnicek
MZahradnicek on May 27 '08
I love love love the idea but feel the execution is lacking. I wish it was colored differently and was more realistic looking. I think this design with a vintage flair would be amazing. Fantastic potential though!
littlecynicism
littlecynicism on May 27 '08
Fab idea, but like MZ said, nicer execution would go a long way...I'll still give it a four, but I'd like to see it fleshed out.
Spokey
Spokey on May 27 '08
Thanks so much for the suggestions and the votes! I can always work on it and change it if it should get picked, so any constructive criticisms are welcome =)
Cadenza-
Cadenza- on May 28 '08
Totally love the idea and placement! It'd be cool to see it a little more polished, but it's awfully cute as is.
FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on May 28 '08
I'm glad most of you weren't here for the Gmail "connect" contest, cause there were three thousand tin can communication designs, even a collab done by me!
Atomic_Redhead
Atomic_Redhead on May 28 '08
I like it, but I agree with a few of the above...it seems like it needs to be more polished. It's rather plain, it could do with a lot more style to it. I love the concept so much though!
Dirt Factory
Dirt Factory on May 28 '08
actually you can't change it.

read the submission rules.

once you submit, it's locked.



I like the concept wraping around the shirt,

but needs some work on the execution.

(more detail? more depth?)

keep em coming!
Spokey
Spokey on May 28 '08
Oh, I think I was looking where it says about duplicate submissions. It says there that you can provide them with an updated version if they choose to print an older version.



But I'm so glad to see that everyone likes the concept!
2 days later
MargotVellocet
MargotVellocet on May 30 '08
I like it. I wish it could be done with some old looking photographs or something.
Spokey
Spokey on May 30 '08
I was thinking about doing that, I may try it depending on how this one scores.
fatbotfreddie
fatbotfreddie on Jun 01 '08
i like it. simple design is good design.
Spokey
Spokey on Jun 01 '08
Thank you!! I agree =)
RememberingTheFuture
RememberingTheFuture on Jun 01 '08
i like it but think it would look better on a colour that isn't so bright
Madshadow
Madshadow on Jun 01 '08
I like the concept of it, but I wish the execution was more "vintage-y" as some already suggested. Its a bit too plain, and the 2 shirt colors happen to be my least favorite shirt colors (kelly green and heather grey), so I may be biased, lol.
jonneh
jonneh on Jun 02 '08
I like it. It's simple, too.
starryluvly
starryluvly on Jun 03 '08
Love the idea behind this tshirt - just wondering if the heart in the wire would be better if it was placed more towards the front of the shirt where it would be more noticeable, then having it wrapped around the side.



That said, maybe it'd look better on the t-shirt: just a bit hard to notice at the mo.
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