My First Torture
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May 27 '08
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ginetteginette on May 27 '08 i'm confused by which era you are portraying,
the kid sort of looks amish. |
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Monkey III on May 27 '08 whuahaha
I want to listnen to the soundtrack now! |
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Hmm...i almost think you need the text. Otherwise it'll be pretty hard to pull off the meaning. Maybe that'd be a good thing though. Good stuff either way.
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'..clowns to the left of me, jokers to the right..'
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Did i hear clowns?? hehe. Yea, if you take out the text, nobody would know where you're coming from. Good job!
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I think it's pretty obvious what you're referencing without the text. The song lyrics at any rate would be copyrighted.
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I would rather it didn't have to be a 10 year old Mr. Blonde but rather a kid from today emulating Mr. Blonde. That'd be cool.
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ha great, what about blonde jr.
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OK, Maybe I'm off track here, I first thought Sweeney Todd! anyway, nicely illustrated.
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he should totally have on black and white
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I don't think he looks amish and I love the idea...I'm just not a fan of the colors
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hm? Don't even know what small text says... and that's important because it's a shirt that's borderline offensive to some people, so the little text could contain something that would alter people's votes - either innocence or more evil-ish stuff.
I don't know. Drawn well though. |
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Also not a fan of the bear print
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FRICKINAWESOME on May 28 '08 Yeah, I was wondering myself why Mr. Blonde at ten years old was in a 1920's outfit...have him more of the 50's greasers and you'd have something. I think the idea is cute enough, but it DEF needs a bit of text to really move it along. Maybe below the design and without the "my first torture" which makes it a bit harsher than it needs to be, and maybe have the kid smiling or looking goody instead of the way more intense eyes closed. It reads serious and funny at the same time right now, but not in a good way. Nice idea tho and please resub!
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Way to go Lt. of Inishmore. I
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Goodidea!
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Keep the text.
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creepy !
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keep the text but navy/brown doesn't do it for me
needs a different color |
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its mr. blonde's grandpa
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GREAT stuff.
Mr Blonde: aged 10 Would probably be enough text |
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that is icky. 5$
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agree with most of the above. less text. 50's clothes maybe? and a radio might be a cool addition.
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what does the text say?
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Thanks for your comments,
The text is the song of the Stealers Wheel - Stuck In The Middle With You. The song of the scene. Without text : http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/5163/stuckingthemiddlewithyoky4.jpg |
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it could do much better without the text.
i'd still get the reference. in fact, it'd probably be more clever that way. |
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damn i really liked this
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