Go easy on me kids as this is my maiden submission.

Haha ok this made me giggle 5

The idea is interesting, but the execution needs a ton of work. Your shapes are too simplistic and your figures are not defined or proportioned accurately. Think also about adding more space in between each god so they have room to breath and stand out a little more. They feel too scrunched together. I really love the colors....and Mohammad's censor bar is hilarious.

censor bar haha, nice idea but agreed^

I do not agree, I see it as such that the disfigured proportions are part of the artwork. Still, to open it up a little wouldn't hurt.

Maiden submission has passed with flying colors if you ask me!:D

I didn't notice it when it was in the critque but your Apollo(?) is missing the arrow in his bow.

Otherwise it's a cool idea.

Great Censorship! You get an extra point for that!

"Mohammed, where..... I can't see a Mohammed!"


HA HA HA HA

Thanks mountain gnome! I'm so glad people are getting it... even if my artistic style is a little Scooby Doo Villainesque.

Haha Scooby Doo Villianesque

Awesome design

weird my friends and I are part of our own god squad...

I am so impressed...and I love the layout! The grouping works. Very cool!

it could use work, true.

But infinite (and I do mean infinite) kudos for the use of the sword and censor bar to hide Mohammed's face! XD

The bar on Mohammed's face is funny, but in traditional Islamic art he is depicted with a scarf overhanging his face -- that would add a bit more mystery without people assuming "Islam = sketchy." Fit the pun into the pre-fabricated design aesthetics to prevent detraction from your core idea.

I love the censor bar.

This is very clever. The only thing I would comment on are the colors. Perhaps using the traditional colors of the religions represented would be a nice touch. Good work.

love the concept! sharpen up your drawing, get some more detail in there (like skeev and meso suggested) and you're good to go, god squad!

Thanks Turbo! Actually, the larger version is a bit more detailed and not blurry... Now that I've played with the critique stuff, I think my next submission will look a lot clearer. It's a little weird at first though trying to figure out how to meet the criteria for submission AND show clear placement and whatnot...

I wish they let you submit minor revisions after you've been entered in the voting, but I can see why they don't so I'll stop whining now.

Where is the Jewish god.

Oh yeah he's everywhere

the censor bar is great. nice idea.

Holy cow! I should have added Moses! I mean, a few of these are God's and a few are prophets so, ya' know... anything goes really.

I like it, but the colors seem a bit off and I'd put the placement either higher or lower

I'd wear it to Church though!

this idea kicks ass, just shape it up a bit with the comments, put it in the critique forum and this will be a print in no time :)

thanks artistLB!

The Mohammed censor is great, true. My main critique: the skin of the figures is the same colour as the shirt.

I'd like to know why the whole of Eygpt is ignored. There were some heavy hitters in there.

because no one cares about you thats why

I think this is an awesome design! I'd wear the crap out of it!

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