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Submitted on:
May 21 '08
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86 comments
Final average score:
2.21 out of 5
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NateT
NateT on May 21 '08
Nice but heh?
Maltzmania
Maltzmania on May 21 '08
love the tie on the guy

keep at it!
miteeminja
miteeminja on May 21 '08
oo i like this
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 21 '08
It seems I'm a bit late for the party! Well, this is my first submission. Please love me.

Description: "It just seems like people weren't made for cubicles."
afishcalledmanda
afishcalledmanda on May 21 '08
love it! love you! :) $5
Pizazz
Pizazz on May 21 '08
Nicely done, but lacking.
Electricsalmoon
Electricsalmoon on May 21 '08
Lacking the hand to backslap Pizaz with!
MeloRuff
MeloRuff on May 21 '08
Awesome.......good luck man!!!!$5$5$5$5$5$5
Taylor_lehman088
Taylor_lehman088 on May 21 '08
cool
lesweet
lesweet on May 21 '08
yeah this smokes - when can i buy it?
nip66
nip66 on May 21 '08
i like maple origins...
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 22 '08
Buy it? I'm just hoping to last 24 hours and 30 minutes.
Dawndarkharp
Dawndarkharp on May 22 '08
$5 sweetie!
Thanks for the awesome support :)
Littlelou
Littlelou on May 22 '08
This is great! 5
NotJustAPoeticFace
NotJustAPoeticFace on May 22 '08
Beautiful. It makes me happy just looking at it.
Nymeria
Nymeria on May 22 '08
I want to write a poem describing my eternal Love for this design. This is without a doubt the best thing I've ever seen on threadless. This WILL be printed, or I'm getting physical.
jasjs
jasjs on May 22 '08
yay jermaine!!
I Am Mevil
I Am Mevil on May 22 '08
Really cool looks like a band shirt. $5
NJz Kollectionz
NJz Kollectionz on May 22 '08
Awesome, finally! Good luck! $5
Beautiful_Poe
Beautiful_Poe on May 22 '08
I'd prefer it with the "Move without boxes" text and without the "move" on the little pieces of paper.
wullagaru
   wullagaru on May 22 '08
as I said in the crits I like this one a lot its got nice movement and teh bit of blue really pops
kaleigh07
kaleigh07 on May 22 '08
This is cool, love the blue on the guys tie! I for one hate my cube!
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 22 '08
Yeah, I hear you, BP. In the crits, the text was in and out a few times. Someone even suggested putting on the back upper neck. Meh, who knows? I think this was my best shot.

Thanks lovely people! Here's to 24 hours and 40 minutes!
littlecynicism
littlecynicism on May 22 '08
I can't tell if it has the text or not? I like it with, but it's still cool without. My fav so far.
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 22 '08
Sorry, the shirt has no text. And thanks!
Enyawd20
Enyawd20 on May 22 '08
Nicely done. Makes me want to break out of my corporate world! Let me know when it is time to sell.
existinmemories
existinmemories on May 22 '08
awesome
fat pigeon
   fat pigeon on May 22 '08
Looks good. The only thing I would suggest is defining the edge of the face where it overlaps the arm, looks kind of jumbled there.
ISABOA
   ISABOA on May 22 '08
it has a classic feel to it -
frozenflames
frozenflames on May 22 '08
Awesome!
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 22 '08
You people are awesome! And I can't believe Isa dropped in. Speaking of dropped, here comes the 24 hour mark . . . a moment of silence, please [unless you're voting, you people can go ahead].

At least we've got the memories, right?
noahbilityxx
noahbilityxx on May 22 '08
i guess i like the idea but i find the design to be too vague; it needs more definition.
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 22 '08
Thanks for the feedback, noahbility. I definitely see what you're saying, as a handful of people have missed the concept entirely. I guess I could have added a few more elements to make it more easily understood.

Being that the design is so messy in and of itself, I tried to keep it as simple as possible. I guess I might have held back a little too much, huh? My hope is that the simple aesthetic is pleasing enough to bring some satisfaction, even without a complete explanation.
Ikarusmyancestor
Ikarusmyancestor on May 22 '08
good sense of movement in the image , but I feel like something's missing....
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 22 '08
Thanks, Ikarusmyancestor. Guess I'll try harder next time, huh?
Goldendust
Goldendust on May 22 '08
Inclusion of a well done swing=priceless

I kind of liked the text... agree with BP.

Wonderful. $5
Mujie
Mujie on May 22 '08
WHEN this is printed I am certainly buying it! love love love it!
I actually like it with the text too. Though I can understand why you might not want it, seeing as many people here seem to be hardcore anti-text. ;]
great design, I can't wait to see more from you
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 23 '08
Looks like it lives another day . . . for now. Thanks for the support and encouragement, everyone! Off to bed.
stilae
stilae on May 23 '08
very nice, love the text
BrandyMichelle
BrandyMichelle on May 23 '08
Perhaps this is weird, but I think the model sporting the T is kind of hot . . .

Er, um, anyway.

This design makes me feels all warm and fuzzy inside. Like, "We CAN do it! We can fight our corporate giants and win!"

And then, we can go swing on swings.

Um, I don't want to appear vague. I really like the design. ;)
BrandyMichelle
BrandyMichelle on May 23 '08
Oh, and by the way - $5.
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 23 '08
I just noticed a little wonkiness in the placement on the sample shirt. As of now, think of it as it looks on the model . . . a bit higher, I think.

But I'm nothing if not flexible.

Thank you good people!
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 23 '08
5 more shopping days . . .
Nymeria
Nymeria on May 24 '08
Nonono, it's not messy. I really think that this one's great! It makes me wanna go swing in a swing! Isn't that enough?


Oh and if I haven't made myself clear: I hope you drown in 5's.
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 24 '08
I can think of no better way to go. No wait. Maybe something involving Chicken Alfredo. But I can only think of one better way. Thanks, Nymeria!

For your previous poetic comment, and this one involving death, you receive top fan honors. :)
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 24 '08
Thanks for all the support, everyone! Just awesome. Even if the final score doesn't show it, I'll know I did something right.
PuterBoy
PuterBoy on May 25 '08
EH-HEEHEEHEEHEE.
SheepMan22
SheepMan22 on May 25 '08
yea the blue tie is great
Ehud L
Ehud L on May 25 '08
you did something right alright! lovely styled shirt. I'd wear this and get lade because of it! But people here dont like text with their images. Damn you illiterate people.
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 25 '08
Haha, Ehud. Thanks for the help in the crits.
Ehud L
Ehud L on May 25 '08
illeterate... eeleterate...? oh shut up
Ehud L
Ehud L on May 25 '08
what help? I'm speaking my mind here. never seen this design in my life
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 25 '08
Silly sillypants.
Mr. Raab
Mr. Raab on May 26 '08
yay!!! I have always been fond of this design, glad it seems to be doing well.
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 26 '08
Hey thanks, Raab! Seems like you were right.
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 26 '08
In the critiques, that is.
leyland_devito
leyland_devito on May 26 '08
Looks like an emo band T shirt.
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 26 '08
Yeah, I've been getting that a little bit. Wasn't intentional. I just thought a suit on a swing was a sort of absurd image that communicated my message well enough.

Thanks for the feedback. And I have nothing against emo bands, bytheway.
Electricsalmoon
Electricsalmoon on May 26 '08
I'm an EMO band tee shirt, and I feel complimented. :)
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 26 '08
Everybody check out this guy's stuff!^ Definitely deserves future prints.
cameron kim jones
cameron kim jones on May 26 '08
make sure you thank dafont.com for the font
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 26 '08
Thanks dafont.com! And thank you cameron kim jones.
cameron kim jones
cameron kim jones on May 26 '08
nah. dont get me wrong, I like the design and the concept. you've kerned the font well too. it's just trying to be careful that you don't fall down the trap that people did when the font base02 came out. Made really good designs look cheesy.
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 26 '08
Gotcha. Good advice, methinks. Thanks.
cameron kim jones
cameron kim jones on May 26 '08
Cheers bro.

Oi, if you haven't already, check out the new batman trailer. I just did then. Heath Ledger's from my hometown and it's good to see his last performance looks quality.
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 26 '08
Definitely looking forward to that one. Thanks!
MelloRuff
MelloRuff on May 26 '08
It's HERE!!!!
P
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!!!!!!!$5
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 26 '08
Aww, thanks, MelloRuff. You're swell. :)
liberatesputnik
liberatesputnik on May 27 '08
Aaah sweet as...I didn't like the text, but you've won me over now I realize it's not on the shirt. I'm not in love with the words on the paper either, but the rest of the design is so fab I love it anyway.
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 27 '08
Ha, thanks sputnik. Ah, yes, that wonderful text. Luckily I made the rest of the design with Diet Coke, Starbucks and Dreamsicles for just such a situation as this.
Call_Me_Handsome
Call_Me_Handsome on May 27 '08
Great job...print it!
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 27 '08
Listen to this guy! ^
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 27 '08
Really unexpected response everybody! One more day!
wilbus245
wilbus245 on May 27 '08
I really love the design, especially the tie. nice. $5
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 27 '08
Thanks, man! I'll keep these comments in my pillowcase for when the final score drops.
Jebbie
Jebbie on May 27 '08
Nice first sub. Definitely will keep you on the radar to see what else comes out of you!


Yes that sounds awkward but I meant it in a nice way.

Oh dear.
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 27 '08
Aw, thanks, Jebbie. Very kind. But I should warn you. Everything that comes out of me is covered in JIF!
Jebbie
Jebbie on May 27 '08
The cleaning product or peanut butter?
Electricsalmoon
Electricsalmoon on May 27 '08
This shirt is rated: $5






`This message was approved by the Emmotive Band Shirt Association of America, opinions expressed during this comment are property and of sole ownership copyright of the EBSAA. We would like to thank you for your continued support of all shirts licensed by the EBSAA. Thanks!`
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 27 '08
Jebbie: I'm nervous now. I've always that my PB&J's were cleaner than those of the other kids . . . this explains so much.

Electric: HAHA!
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 27 '08
I've always *THOUGHT, that is, Jebbie.
Jebbie
Jebbie on May 27 '08
I read that last comment as I always thought that was Jebbie.

And I was like wtf who is me? I am who?

Close shave.


All my non product comments are bumps so no need to get snarky electricsalmoon. Even if you weren't.

Or something
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 27 '08
He WAS getting snarky, wasn't he? But I think his snarkism was directed to an earlier poster. And I'm glad you realized your error before you decided to get medieval. Close shave, indeed.
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 28 '08
The countdown begins . . .
nintechno
nintechno on May 28 '08
$5
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 28 '08
Thanks, nintechno! Really means a lot. And everyone I didn't thank personally, thanks heavy heaps! I'm kinda scared to imagine how this will score, but whatever it is, you people have filled my week with rainbows and milkshakes. And JIF. Ask Jebbie.

See you all on the flipside . . .
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 28 '08
Hey, thanks everybody! 2.21? I couldn't be happier! You guys have been really awesome to a newbie. :)

MUAH!
patperry23
   patperry23 on May 28 '08
I don't get it.
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 29 '08
That's alright. Not everything is for everyone. :)
Electricsalmoon
Electricsalmoon on May 29 '08
Not directed at you in any way Jebbie. Inside joke, kinda... Well, not a very old one if you look a few posts earlier. What in the hell is a snarky? :)
yellowboi93
yellowboi93 on May 29 '08
hey jay how do you make a shirt so awesome?
seriously
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 29 '08
Thanks, buddy. You should ask at your school about graphic design. They'll help you out.
nintechno
nintechno on May 31 '08
no problem, jay. i'm looking forward to your next design :D
2 days later
MelloRuff
MelloRuff on Jun 02 '08
2.21. not bad, did they print it???? Jus wanderin.....
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on Jun 02 '08
Won't know for a little while, I think. Thanks Mello! :)
240 days later
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on Jan 28 '09
Please note my comment on your other piece. Good night.
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