|
The only thing that weirds me out about the dead guy is that he's... well, he's naked. Except for the chute. Unless he's a crash dummy or something... hmm...
|
|
maybe rework the guy a bit.
I can appreciate that maybe he is supposed to look strange probably with broken bones and such buts it just looks a bit off. nice idea. |
|
sooooooooooo bombastically awesome! fix his arm/ hand and crick his legs/ankles and turn his head. Theeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen we gots a prime T people!
|
|
Great typography and design. The composition and placement is exquisite. Love the closed-minded victim and I think that his body is perfectly disfigured, as it should be. $5
|
|
I HATE those lame motivational posters that teachers have in their classrooms if only they had thought to put dead people on them. Love it!
|
|
The hand attached to the broken arm could be clenching the string beside it that's attached to the parachute to reveal that at least he tried to pull and open it...and was too late.
|
|
I think you should make the broken legs and arms more niticable. Right now it looks a little worng... Nice work though, great idea!
|
|
i like it a lot, and i'd buy it, except first you need to change the guy by fixing his hand, leg etc. if they're supposed to look broken make it more drastic kinda. you know? $5 anyway
|
About my design