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I think those those triangles are too bold and prevent the eye from making it all the way to cool drawing.
Critique mine please, http://www.threadless.com/critique/20551/Stick_it_to_the_Fisherman |
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its really cool!
I like it. ...at first sight the colour of the shirt seems to go against the artwork... |
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The red triangle on top of such light valued shapes and t-shirt is a very large contrast.
I find it too distracting. |
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I think it's great, the free flowing illustration and watercolor that is contrasted by the solid shapes of the triangles.
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