Trap for wolves
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May 09 '08
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The one issue I have with this is that you can't see they're wolves, they could be anything with evil eyes, and without knowing they're wolves one doesn't necessarily make the connection to little red riding hood, it just looks like a random red puppet.
With the title to explain it I really love the concept, but without (as it would be if you were wearing it) it sort of falls apart. |
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add some tails, ears, and scruffy fur and youll have wolves :)...and a great concept!
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yes, I don't mean you totally need to re-draw the background, just if a few of the eyes had bodies silhouetted too (with ears, tail etc as above) it would be clearer.
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button eyes would work well
good luck |
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OMG they killed kenny Hahaha :)
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wow! whether they're wolves or just scary woodland creatures, i love it. $5
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$5
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FRICKINAWESOME on May 10 '08 I agree this needs a wolf or two coming out of the shadows, and i'd love to see Little Red Riding Hood hiding behind some bushes on the bottom of this tee or on the back of it. Great idea.
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The tshirt reflects an idea, which I think to be explained well, I prefer allowing that the imagination should work .. but I will prepare a version with your opinions, thanks to all
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i didn't see how it was red riding hood and the wolves until i read your first comment...
it is an idea, but if people look at it and don't understand it your idea isn't getting across correctly. |
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I agree with alexconsuelo and also Danielle, who did not post a comment, but IS next to me and has opinions.
Solid idea, but it's just not coming across. Not everyone has to get it without help, but a few people ought to be given the chance. It's not really important that you clarify the wolves AS wolves. I think that just clarifying the puppet as little red riding hood would be enough to create the connection. Just a little extra nudge to give the more clever viewer a clue without having it explained would be great. |
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I like simplicity and concept alot. But I agree with edean that both red riding hood and wolves are not obvious until I read your comment. But it is still good as is. 5$$$
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ok, I understand your opinions and continue learning
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the red riding hood of a dall is very 2D. give that chick some depth and look a bit more like a little girl in a red hood.you can still keep the dall look. maybe a picknick basket. that little bitch always had a basket on her in the forest.
Cheers Mate |
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but i like wolves.
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haha, I LOVE the idea! Wouldn't mind more definition on the doll, button eyes would be fun, maybe a stitched-on smile?
that being said, I love it a lot the way it is, too. So really, I'm not too fussy about changing much. great idea :) |
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thank you very much Sari
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littleclyde on May 14 '08 Yeah, a little tweaking a la previous comments, but the idea is really good here...And that's worth a lot!
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I personally feel it just needs something to let the viewer know about the wolves... that's all really. Someone mentioned having the Red Riding Hood in some bushes... I feel that would be a bit too much.
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