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Grow'd up

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Can be on blue or green
leyland_devito
leyland_devito on May 08 '08
Cool concept... too static though.
jahmina
jahmina on May 08 '08
cool idea, needs a little bit of work
squidspawn
squidspawn on May 08 '08
^ agreed.

I think maybe you should make the shadows on a wall behind him or something to view easier.

Nice idea though.
more.than.ordinary
more.than.ordinary on May 08 '08
check out the sister



http://www.threadless.com/submission/161699/Grow_d_up_II/showmore,designs
MMMMMiller
MMMMMiller on May 08 '08
It'd be nice to see more highlights in the boy.
MeggieRose
MeggieRose on May 09 '08
I agree with squidspawn about flipping the shadows onto a wall so they're right-way-up, and I would add that it would look much more unified to only do it on blue or to have the boy be a dark shade of green on a green shirt.
cyanidee
cyanidee on May 09 '08
These designs remind me of the masonic symbol
JordanReed
JordanReed on May 09 '08
Well I saw this when it was in its critique stages and I feel like when you took away his eyes. that little line that is supposed to be a smirk, now looks like a nose, and the white lines shadows or shading (whatever you want to call it looks like some sort of mouth giving him a huge cartoony looking jaw instead of looking like a boys face with a hoody. so basically the shadows on the hood look like a part of the face now that the eyes are gone. so maybe if you add some of those shadows back in there. I don't. thats my 2 cents.



best of luck.
merryduffer
merryduffer on May 10 '08
I agree that placing the shadows on a wall would add interest.

The perspective seems a little off, but maybe that's because of the boy doesn't have a face, so it's difficult to tell if he's as eye level or we're looking slightly down on him.
more.than.ordinary
more.than.ordinary on May 10 '08
if everyone wants to critique the design so much, do it when I actually have it in the critique section and can actually change the design, might be a little more helpful there...
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