Grow'd up
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May 08 '08
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Cool concept... too static though.
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cool idea, needs a little bit of work
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^ agreed.
I think maybe you should make the shadows on a wall behind him or something to view easier. Nice idea though. |
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check out the sister
http://www.threadless.com/submission/161699/Grow_d_up_II/showmore,designs |
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It'd be nice to see more highlights in the boy.
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I agree with squidspawn about flipping the shadows onto a wall so they're right-way-up, and I would add that it would look much more unified to only do it on blue or to have the boy be a dark shade of green on a green shirt.
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These designs remind me of the masonic symbol
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Well I saw this when it was in its critique stages and I feel like when you took away his eyes. that little line that is supposed to be a smirk, now looks like a nose, and the white lines shadows or shading (whatever you want to call it looks like some sort of mouth giving him a huge cartoony looking jaw instead of looking like a boys face with a hoody. so basically the shadows on the hood look like a part of the face now that the eyes are gone. so maybe if you add some of those shadows back in there. I don't. thats my 2 cents.
best of luck. |
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I agree that placing the shadows on a wall would add interest.
The perspective seems a little off, but maybe that's because of the boy doesn't have a face, so it's difficult to tell if he's as eye level or we're looking slightly down on him. |
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if everyone wants to critique the design so much, do it when I actually have it in the critique section and can actually change the design, might be a little more helpful there...
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