oh boy that type kills me. i really think you should try hand-rendering your type in your next submissions - it will work so much better! especially for a piece like this about 'school' where hand written scribbly-text would have jived with this so well.
Well, aside from the type, all you have there is a school bus. If you're too cool for school, shouldn't the bus be all tricked out or something? If anything, the bus says, "I'm going to school" so therefore, you must not be too cool for school. Right?
i mean it was more about a clean look and a good phrase , but if you want to junk it up and do that i guess you could since school bus drivers are too cool for school
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