it's kind of busy if yknow what i mean

you wanna see cluttered, there's way worse around here. and all the components work together really well. the style immediately grabbed me; it is one-of-a-kind in these parts, and very organic and warm. ~WANT~

nice nice nice........

i like the style and concept, but agree about a tad much clutter. bit less in the sky, please.

it fades nicely

i agree with the "busy" comment, but i really like the musical aspects of it! super cool!

a little bottom heavy near the stomach area, but i like the
general idea, design and off-white color with the black

thanks !!!

I like the texture, almost like this was drawn with chalk on a blackboard. I agree that it feels too busy.

Cool one color work!
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original details is better too it was just like this to fit the preview

Very nice design and rendering. I love the spontaneity of the piece. Great style, texture and composition. I don't think it's too busy, all the elements work to keep the eye revolving around the celebrators. There's an upbeat rhythm to it, and it looks great on the shirt. $5

As a heads up, you can't print across the shoulder seams unless it's a belt print. Get a free account at Flickr.com so you can post a high res and then link it to your sub. Also, never start your sub comments with a criticism of your work. You invite negative comments when there might not be a problem. If you really think there's a problem fix it before you sub it. Cheers!

quister ...thanks load on ur sweet comment really appreciated and ur tips too yes i got ur point at this last, part will it wont be on the shoulder just big print yes to cover all,, i never done any bekt prints yet but maybe soon :)
yes flicker is cool way to have ur work in high res. and show too pll i think ill have my account soon and do than thanks and good luck with ur work too :) hope see more soon!

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I adore this!

it's be cool if this glowed in the dark.

not many pll like glow in dark effect plus mostly like to see a design in night and light too, :),,

i like this, i would have totally bought it, too bad it didn't get approved..damn =/ you should resubmit it with some changes so more people like it. for example make it less clutered. hope it gets approved in the future if you resub =)