Had this in the critique section with the word Phoenix spelt wrong.. doh!
In two shades of grey on a black t shirt with the heart face placed over the heart of the person.
The burning heart can either go on the back at heart level very small or down the bottom of the t shirt or be ditched. I like bird on front with no heart and I like the idea of having the old burnt heart on the back and the new one on the front

composition is a little boxxy... otherwise it's really fun!

YES PLEASE
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interesting

I'm not hugely fond of the heart-shaped head, but it's growing on me. I love the rest of it though.

thanks for the comments!

I think I like this a lot - the heart/head has me a little weirded out too, but in a good way. Can I have a few touches of metallic ink for a $5?

No need for the illo on back, but I'm liking the front.

sure Keter, anything you want.. I'll just ask the nice threadless staff...

I think it's very pretty

Really special, mucha suerte! 5∞

gracias!

beautiful, we both like our art on black -
very cool style ! 5

oooh, I like it, except for the face, which creeps me out. Fix that and lose the "burning heart" thingie, and I'd call this "printable".

lovely, personal style and it looks great on the shirt. $5

funny how different people react to things!

I could lose the burning heart, always said that, but to me the face makes it stand out, a birds face just wouldn't have the same impact or meaning...
thanks for the comments ya'll

I really like this! 4 and possible $

the heart is strange but cool. I would like it if the wings were spread out more :)

dont like the heart shaped face...the rest is nice though

wow a broken heart thats soooooooooo deeeep.

dunna415, not sure whether you are being serious or taking the piss :)
lots of broken hearts out there and lots of phoenixes rising from the old broken ones!

I like the bird and the heart face, but they don't seem like the same design. The huge contrast between the vibrant color of the face and the lack of color in the rest of the image almost makes me feel like I'm looking at two different designs. Perhaps if there were a few slight accents of the red in the ashes and feathers? Just a thought.

love the body but not a the head

eeeeeeyyyyaaa, my point is its tacky to show you have a broken heart by actually showing a broken heart..

nice style here