Hahah, I was doing my Chem. hw & started drifting off into my thoughts... I thought about how I recently got rejected & so I came up with this design! HAHA, jk!

...MAYBE. x]

lmao... I like how you make everything fart.

hehe I think its cute, I'd buy it!

the fart is shit the rest is great

this is really underworked.

yeah, somebody said the banana one was "unfinished," ginette's going with "underworked"...i'm going to have to settle on "half-assed." not trying to dis, but it's pretty apparent that you drew this on the back of your homework, scanned it in, and sent it off. maybe put a little more effort into your subs, so we know what you're actually capable of as an artist. just my two cents.

the drawings kinda suck but i love the whole idea. make it look better please and id do buy it! for now i'll give it a 4 :)

minus the fart, i like it a lot.

I like the concept here, since I felt the same way. What I don't like is how many people here feel the need to unfairly criticise the designs of other people. Constructive criticism, please. We're supposed to be grown up about this.

i don't see the point of making an effort to critique this when it's pretty obvious the designer didn't make much of an effort either.

Not everyone is a professional artist, so I feel it's unfair of you to judge everyone as if they were. Everyone is entitled to have a chance to display their designs here.
Take this old adage to heart:

"If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all."

It's also in nice, bright, bold, pink, simplified letters right next to the text box, in case you missed it.

oops i forgot most users here are babies.

i was not being mean, but completely honest. this is in the end a never-ending t-shirt design competition, and there really is no sense in babying someone unless you never want them to improve.

to the designer: these really should have all been placed into the critique section. some of these are okay-ish concepts but it's really obvious you just sort of blurted them out on paper without reworking them...

but i have a feeling that you know this and don't care.

"Underworked" is not critique. Try making a suggestion such as, "how about a little shading?" or "resizing would be great."

And, oops, I forgot that some users here are egotistic :D

i like the concept (minus the fart). i do like the childish style, but i feel that it would be wayyy better if you could clean it up a bit while keeping the childish feel

haha, okay. wow ppl arguing like crazy on this.

uhm, so i'm sorry for sucking at this?

i jsut started this thing like a month ago or w.e & yeah, I'm hella new to this.

iguess that's no excuse , but i'm learning so yeahh.

i guess i should "pimp" up my stuff before sticking it on heree.

so i need shading & to put more efforttt. anything other suggestions?

thanks for the critiques guys, though you guys were like biting at each other. xD

& btw, i wasn't really offended. it's reality & i need to know what sucks & yeah.