Hm. There is really no point in "greeking" unless you're trying to demonstrate your font. It really does seem like you have nothing interesting to say with this design. :/
the idea seems overplayed here on threadless. i think i've already seen three designs revolving around the same theme. the best one being alex trochut's. maybe you should work on your own unique font because there's really nothing new or exciting about your design.
Concept's not too bad, but I don't like the presentation of the idea.
I'd rather have the words "lost for words?" in block letters, and have those composed of the Lorem Ipsum text, forming the shapes of the words. Or something like that.
About my design
Keep saying interesting things :)
Green font made by Emil Kozak (uploaded on his website)