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Apr 28 '08
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benjipaffel
This is my first submission for Moby Loves Threadless. It Features some wild fellows who had a crazy night of heavy drinking... Slushies.
benjipaffel
benjipaffel on Apr 28 '08
I submitted another design along these same lines except its a big ol' gorilla passed out (it's a lot more colorful)! Keep your eye out for it!
zamboosh
zamboosh on Apr 29 '08
nice 5
EricDiaz
EricDiaz on Apr 29 '08
ahahahaa, sweet! i'm glad you added that oxygen tank.
Park~Life Empire
Park~Life Empire on Apr 29 '08
sweet!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/19589/paper_bag_man_pop_art
chartreusse
chartreusse on Apr 30 '08
i like the drawing but i dont get the concept
benjipaffel
benjipaffel on Apr 30 '08
It's the results of two elderly guys drinking sugary slushies and passing out. I made it equal to young people having a alcohol binge except on slushies. I don't know what else to say. I guess theres no deep thought behind it, if thats what your looking for. Just FUN!
FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on Apr 30 '08
Those old-timers went friggin CRAZIEEEE last night! I really like their tame antics (drinking slushies, playing checkers, listening to old-timey music) to a night they will never forget...oh, wait, they already forgot it.
benjipaffel
benjipaffel on Apr 30 '08
Haha! Nice. thanks for the comments
Peeps
Peeps on May 01 '08
Infantilizes old people.
laner
laner on May 01 '08
i read it as old people still being up for a party ^_^
benjipaffel
benjipaffel on May 01 '08
Exactly! Sorry "peeps". Not trying infantilize old people. The worst that people could take from this is that Elderly people can't hold their liq... I mean sugar. Its all fun. I could put guys in their 30's drinking and passed out and nobody would have a problem with it. IF I made a poor joke about elderly and diapers I would understand where you are coming from... but elderly having fun. Whats wrong with that?
turbolucy
turbolucy on May 01 '08
nothing is wrong with that - the elderly should party hardy how ever they want to! i want to wear this shirt when i'm 98 and causing total chaos in the rest home!!! $$$5
benjipaffel
benjipaffel on May 01 '08
Right ON Turbolucy!! Thanks for the comment!
NJz Kollectionz
NJz Kollectionz on May 02 '08
I feel like the design blends into the shirt color too much.
benjipaffel
benjipaffel on May 02 '08
Valid point. I did pick very dull colors for this one on purpose. I didn't want any bright colors. I think it works well on the Heather Gray (or was it Sand in the close up). Either way different shirt colors are available. Thanks for the comment!
benjipaffel
benjipaffel on May 02 '08
Oh, I forgot to say that I also wanted the guys to stand out as well. So that explains the same colors for everything other than the guys.
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HeyyWombat
HeyyWombat on May 05 '08
haha i luve how it's not even achohol, i guess the old guys can't take it...definatley a 5$
josevergara
josevergara on May 05 '08
VERY NICE 5
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animammal
animammal on May 22 '08
I don't have any problem with how it treats old people, and they're my career. Which I love. So.

I like the design, love the concept, and understand why you chose understated colors. Nice work.
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