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i dont think it needs the speech bubble
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at first glance the sun looked like wings for a coke rocket ship, love the idea
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Maybe change "Coka" to "Cola" and I also saw wings, or a rocket, cool idea.
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I thought the sun looked like wings, too.
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haha! This is nice.
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the sun and sand dunes look a little funny
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I think it looks nice!
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Chengui on Apr 23 '08 Agree with the above comments, I would change the sun to the shadow color and I think all will be remedied. Nice work. Doesn't need the bubble.
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Oh. there's a beach background? i thought those were wings too!!
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great idea
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with the sun/round bg object being dark i thought it was wings on the cola can like a rocket of some sort... I think that might actually look good white, and make the coke can really pop
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thx for all the comments! heh! Can i redo it and submit again?:D
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i think the "coka" and shell speech bubble are fine, but the sun being so big is a little confusing ... but not necessarily in a bad way
definitely awesome idea |
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i hate the speech buble and the "coka" as well
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yeohgh on Apr 23 '08 LOVING IT!!! i think the illustration and concept is great!!! SUPER $5
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above changes, then it would be $5
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No speech bubble, but ill still give it a $5
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lose that bubble and you're rockin
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make the sun a different color and i'd love it.
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awe poor crabbie, makes my crab sad just looking at it.
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simpsons beach vacation episode?
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doesn't need the speech bubble.... good design w/ a good point!
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If that is the sun behind it, the shadow is completely wrong...
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heh..!it is not a sun.. it is a background.
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FRICKINAWESOME on Apr 25 '08 Petou on Apr 25 '08
simpsons beach vacation episode? I was wondering if someone was gonna say this before me. lol. |
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Buena idea ;-D
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why does everyone need a speech bubble?! ditch it please!
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The speech bubble is not necessary at all. I think it should be removed. Also the can saying coka is kind of weird. It would probably be better if it said cola. Also, with the sun being so close in color to the can it looks like it is a weird wing type thing off of the can. I like the idea, but I think it needs some work.
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tbh, it kinda reminds me of a sceen in The Simpsons, when Homer throws a cola can out of the car, and then the hermit crab uses it as its new home.
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haha!
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the sun distorts the shape of the can...lose the sun
make the can a little rotated so it's not perfectly aligned. speech bubble is not needed. good luck! |
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exactly what Sweet and Snarky said.
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oh i thought those were wings and then realized it's supposed to be ...sand and sun....
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freakin cute! not too crazy about the coka..but otherwise perfect!
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i know very little about art on Apr 29 '08 Nice idea. Lovely drawing!
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Jemae on May 08 '09 re-sub this! :))
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