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lol
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The third one's face is frightening. But I have to give you props for making each one unique. A little mor variation could have been achieved though such as in their hair colour. You have some colours available. But I can see the appeal of an all-brunette burlesque show.
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ha!
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I think this is my favourite design on Threadless : great drawn, beautiful colours ... I want it !
5$5$5$5$5$5$5$5$5$5$ FIVE DOLLARS 5$5$5$5$5$5$5$5$5$5$ |
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thats hot :)
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awesome... $5
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I love the colors. I don't think they should be changed.
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yeah the third ones face is having issues but it's cool. Reminds me of dr sketchy's anti-art school.
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Colors are great. And some meat on their bones no less! $5
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It's an okay illustration, but I don't know anyone who would wear this. Wait, I DO know two guys that would wear this but I don't like them very much.
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The illustration is okay, but the stylization of the figures isn't consistent. Some appear more realistic, while the third figure on the front is more cartoony.
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I think it's the figure all the way to the left that's bothering me. It's not that she's not wearing stockings like the others, but the lower legs of the others, and the fan the one girl is holding, is in shadow. And yes, the one turning and looking at the viewer has a larger head than the others.
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some burlesque girls just have ET shaped heads...they'll even charge you extra for that...
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The third one from the left looks like her face is done in a completely different style. Other than that, I like it.
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The choice of colors are awsome. Beautiful design...
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Nice illustration, but won't wear it.
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I LOVE IT! I am a burlesque dancer and I seriously would wear this shirt all the time, hahaha! Awesome!
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I love it, I would buy it if you changed the thrid girl's face. It looks a little bit deformed. 5$
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For those not into E.T Shaped heads...
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You can't post a picture in a submission blog, if that's what you're trying to do. Post a link.
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To see an revised version http://www.broadsideart.com/img130.jpg it's not letting me post it hear
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Ooooh, much nicer.
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Really nice illustration, but not something I'd wear. 4 with the revised head.
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Cool @ the revision, I'd wear it.
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i'd be the resubmit after you fix 3rd girls face....she looks like she had a stroke
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Buy*
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Who honestly would wear a bedroom fantasy on a shirt right out in public? This belongs in a schoolboys sketchbook.
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I like it, but I would never wear it.
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The illustration's not bad, but why would anyone wear this on a shirt?...berrynoir?
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i love the revized version, and i'd TOTALLY wear it on a shirt...and no, i'm not gay hahaha
$$$$$$5$$$$$$$$$ love love love |
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the revision is perfect - so slutty and beautiful at the same time! give all the girls $5!
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Huh? What? Why me? :) Why would I wear it on a tee...I dunno - why would I wear anything on a tee? I guess something about it appeals to me. Mostly I love the color combination and I think I could rock this with jeans - there's nothing much deep about my reasoning.
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makes me wanna go watch some hentai porn
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Love this; I'd totally wear it :D
such beautiful colours and great work on the girls! |
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good job on the revision, resub and I am sure you'll get a higher score
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the illustration is nice but i'd never wear this and if i saw someone else wearing it i'd probably flinch...
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Im glad most of you like the revison...
For those who haven't seen it... Good Ol' Fun Time Burlesque Revision |
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Huh? What? Why me? :)
ha! i think i'll end all my posts with "...berrynoir?" from now on. i like the revision...berrynoir? |
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good revision
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yes much better. you get $6 now. ;)
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very nice!! workin on that thang fo me??
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$5 for the revision. beautiful design. i actually wouldn't wear it, but i know a few girls i would buy it for.
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great illustration! If it doesn't work for threadless i'm sure a different target audience would eat it up. nice job 5$
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this isn't anything threadless seems to be into.
you obviously have skill, but i wouldn't wear it either. |
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colors are cool
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I mean your colors not just colors in general although they are all cool
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I love the colors. the illustration is a little too slutty for me. but that's just me. good job.
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its hot!
damn id take that off. ; ) |
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