My first threadless.com submission, please be kind!

sorry but i cant see what it is, blood .. and . ..

obviously a duck

Would of been nicer if I had a bigger template, there's some detail to it.

Thanks for the, er, constructive and respectful comments.

i'd like more without the text...it seems the text just takes away from the image.

Yeah, I think so. The text was a bit of an after thought, and I didn't particularly like the fact that when I rescaled it, it lost clarity. Thanks for the constructive comment, 007. I have new faith in people now.

yah. the text doesn't work on this shirt, but i love the aesthetic of it. really. use it somewhere else.

the sketch is ace

i love ducks. nice sketch look

like the others said, take the text away and you'll have one awesome tshirt. keep it up.

very cool illustration, I think it's ok with the text though, brings a nice balance to the print..

Zoom!

I'm not sure why you guys are seeing a duck, it's obviously some crazy AWOL sketch with knives for feet.
I really dig this design but like the others said, the text should go. I think it makes the design look crooked.

nice work, looking forward to seeing what else you can come up with.

Nice work Pickasso my lad! Keep it up! highly original T-zine, I'd go the KrazyHouse with that on, deffo. Can't see a duck in it though, and I liike the text, adds that layer, and as Peter Jackson says, its all about layers! Nice.

Thank you for the comments, they are very much appreciated!

In response to some of the comments, click on the link below for a larger preview of the T-shirt!

http://www.hornydog.co.uk/ofwalkingabortion_big.jpg

Or, er, copy and paste it into your browser. Doh.

cool when you see it close up.

Love the wire-frame look, but I agree about the text.

no text because people can come up with their own interpretation better that way
if anything the eyes could be thicker, black, or more developed with a pupil or so...

Thanks for the comments! I suppose it wouldn't be a problem to get rid of the text. The weird thing is, I adore t-shirt designs with typography. A lot of the t-shirts I've bought from threadless have a strong typographical theme to them, so my next design could well be something along those lines. I've noticed a lot of comments on other t-shirts I've scored mentioned that the typography shouldn't be used in those designs.

The best thing about pupil-less eyes means they look pretty evil, though a tiny pupil may not come out as well as it should. Interesting comment though!

Is it an alien? Perhaps its just a creature. Anyhow, I took a look at the larger design on your site and I feel that its great as is.

like the sketch. like the look, but I agree with the crowd...lose the text.

looks like a rabbit skull to me, i'd wear it :D

you should change the text

I like!!!

without the text this is fly... the text makes it seem like a (really pretty) shirt for a hardcore band though. i'd buy without the text

Belated Merry Christmas.