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Maybe something on the back with modern building type letters?
Like, "And now..." I dunno. The font is sick! Hand made? Awesome. |
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It took me a while to figure out it says we die... I read it as "wedie"... like a weed-like character or something.
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trying too hard with the darker colored letters
understandably, you're going for multiple messages within the same message i just think it stands on it's own without the wedie/we die/ we d i e |
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Yeah, I could do without the darker letters. It'd look better without 'em and the "we die" message doesn't add enough to be worth that drop in the visual appeal.
Otherwise, great design. |
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looks brilliant. lovely typo. still with these colours. the others don't work as well. or keep "we die" always in a darker/lighter version of the typo colour. rod/black/white is too much. blue too.
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ok, well, i see the cleverness now that i know what it says. not sure if there is a way to not have it be so wedie. still lovin the topography.
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I like it on the turquoise/blue option best, but would prefer it if the "we die" was tonal instead of yellow.
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love the handmade type.
not so much the dark letters. the message is best left subtle. it will be more meaningful if all the letters are the same color. i really like the blue shirt. |
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too happy for meeee lol but stil not bad would liked to see more colors or maybe birds!!! but hmm not bad!
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yeah i think it's a great shirt without the "we die". the type is fantastic and i dig the colors. the "we die" element doesn't seem to add much. perfect without it.
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this is really cool.
I have to admit, I didn't understand that it said "we die" until I read the comments. |
There are two other colours I'll link for your consideration