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1501 days ago
Submitted on:
Apr 17 '08
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Average score:
2.71 from 1,705 votes
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haha, the only thing i don't like about it is this tshirt color.
but i love the design.. |
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I'm not into the text. If you got rid of the text I'd buy ten of these shirts. $4$
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I think you did an excellent job with the text. nice design. 4
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yeohgh on Apr 17 '08 SUPERRRR!! love those txt, bring back the mood, Rocking Raid71
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roadkill3d on Apr 17 '08 I love the text. Fantastic!
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WanderingBert on Apr 17 '08 Great stuff! The text is awesome.
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ginetteginette on Apr 17 '08 i don't really like the text being there at all, but also it seems too heavy to me. the text seems like the focal point when i rather it be the actually illustration, which i really really like
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I like it without the text, and would totally buy it if you removed it! :)
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renfrue on Apr 17 '08 i have no prodlem with the text ;-)
lookin good! |
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Robsoul on Apr 17 '08 text is perfect, not feeling the sun though. Still 5ved and buyed.
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Great concept. I agree that the text overwhelms the design. seems like the rocket should be the focal point.
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Edword on Apr 17 '08 nice!!
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The spillage interfering with the text makes the text work perfectly with the rest of your design. I'll side with Robsoul that I'm not totally feeling the sun, but still $5.
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Slightly smaller text would be nice. As others said, it takes away focus from the image.
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i think it would work without text. or at least make it smaller. it's really overwhelming. other than that it's great!!
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looks awesome
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I think just a little hand-drawn speech bubble coming out of the top of the "rocket" would be the best way to present the text. The image is fun on its own. The text should be the subtle cherry on top.
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fatheed on Apr 18 '08 Turned out awesome Chris. I love how the image interacts with the text. I believe they call this a juxtaposition. $
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dacat on Apr 18 '08 Love the rocket, text looks cool, but I agree the sun could go. 5
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ooooh i am pleased with the final background
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herky on Apr 18 '08 cool, I like how you made some of the middle letters off kilter in the text.
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Get rid of the text and this gets a 5 from me.
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very nice. i agree with most - the sun should go but everything else is $$$. 5
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I'd ditch the text and the sun, and just have that awesome rocket pop and the structure around it. Pretty fricking sweet. Also, bleh, different color shirt! Then I would totally buy this.
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I hear abby (above) on the typography - lose that. Don't dumb it it down by spelling it out for people - its clever. I'd buy. Maybe different colour though.
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mezo on Apr 18 '08 A DELICIOUS problem! Nice work- rad colors -rad text.
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hahaha. i used to LOVE those ice creams!
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Ditch the sun in the back, use another typo and change the color of the t and I will definately buy it !!
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The text reinforces the idea and also you have interesting type treatment as the popsicle makes the type drip with it..
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thunderpeel on Apr 18 '08 yummmmmmm
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i know very little about art on Apr 18 '08 Sweet!
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= the text and it's awesome!
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change the shirt colour and what happened to the guys head??
i like the text in a bubble idea, too. |
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valorandvellum on Apr 19 '08 Haha, nice! And funny little tag on the example shirt :-P
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love it!
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mmmm. Popsicles
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this is fantastic perfect love the colors 5$$$$$$$$$$$
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Much better without text!!
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awesome!! I like the text :D
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I'd actually prefer it both without the text and the sun... but then it'd be a $5.
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the image is great, but the shirt colour isn't the best.
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i like the text, but it's too big. haha, & i love those popsiscles! :]
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cool......i think i rather like it without the text but....i am not sure....yes i am. without! but still you'll get a 5$
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i'm sure i've seen this idea before but $5 because it rockssssssssss
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no texty pleasey
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;-)
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littleclyde on Apr 22 '08 When I was a kid someone told me if I ate one of those, my stomach would explode. I didn't quite believe them at the time, but I didn't want to risk it either. But I guess they were right if that sucker can fly off into space.
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Love the illustration. Nice work
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cool! print it
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Tonteau on Apr 22 '08 Great stuff, Raid. I would like to see the letters coloures like the lolly.
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Tonteau on Apr 22 '08 *coloured
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Keep the text (although it could be *slightly* smaller). Not 100% sure about the sun. Great idea and execution.
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aaaamazing. fllllawless.
5$ |
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Love it.
I was just about to close my browser after a series of poor designs and then this came up. Nice one. |
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Text is fine... but shirt color needs to be changed, unless the sun is removed. The yellow on yellow doesn't work for me.
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Flying Mouse on Apr 23 '08 Nice!
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haha, I really like it, text and yellow and all.
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text = problem
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you took an overused idea and made it new again
nice! |
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I like the text (maybe smaller?) but I'd still buy it without. i think the sun should be styled differently??
I'm okay with the colour too! |
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4!
I'd make it 5$ if there was no text! |
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why no text? what's wrong with these people
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Too bad its a firecracker and not rocket...
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Hahaha! A very big problem! Awesome! $5!
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awesome
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I would actually love this both with the text and without
if you put them side by side it depends... one is more beachy and fun (with text) and the other is just artsy and ironic- without. Either way, $5 |
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anti-textist on this one.
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4 days later
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I think it works with or without the text as it's that good
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awesome score
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the boy fitz hammond on May 20 '08 awesome!!
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60 days later
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i want this shirt, NOW
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