the text is real cliché'd but the image is really really well done and has a nice style to it. i wish it was just used in a less cliché concept.
also, i'm a bit bothered by the way it just cuts off. personally i would have prefered to see it connect to some 'ground' and have that in the middle of the shirt rather than the bottom corner.
you've got great style though, fo'sho'. loooove that type.
I do like that tree illo. The font 'leaves' me a little let down... it doesn't seem to integrate well. Also, maybe a leaf could be running off, or "leaving" the scene of the tree.
roomire: VERY nice! Surprisingly so, and it seems the more I look at it, the more I like it...
NOT a fan of the shirt color choices though, they all look horrible to me...For this, I would love it on a dark brown, but I know that'd conflict w/ the outline of the tree..maybe a nice tan/light brown if that exists?
Also, I think it'd be hilarious if you used that mock of the cliche quote instead: "Make like a Tree and get the fuck out of here!" Hahahah
Pixtoons: I actually disagree, I think the font is a refreshing change from the usual shit font treatments people use...and it really seems (IMO) to go really well w/ the robust outlines and quasi-sketchy feel to it...
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