I think it's perfect how it is, people generally won't get enough time to read it if it's written on the book and I think the O on the book makes it clear he's reading aloud. It would be different if there was nothing on the book.
Title on book. And I kow its a style, but the book looks just a teeny tiny bit too off kilter, with the larger front and smaller back. Maybe make the diff a little less? I know, i'm knit picking.
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madruga
hehehe! funny!
I loved the concept, but maybe on a different execution...
Segue assim, cara! =)
zenproducts
dude this is funny! cool illustration also!
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writing.onthewalls
lovelovelove!!
indiesigner
sweet character design man, looks great!
vixen_with_velocity
Awsome! But it may be better if you make the book title "About Osteporosis" and omit the bubble. $5
PauloAccioly.
FUNNY! 5*
print!
wheskey
I love this.
C Kid
5!!!
Maku-chan
heh $5
Pixtoons
Agree... delete the voice balloon, and put the title on the book... you've got a winner then.
Kerfunkle
yep, move the title to the book, 4
Harfangoria
I think leave the title, it looks more like Death is reading aloud maybe? It's jut better. And it'd be too small on the book. $5!
TheSuperunknown
Made me laugh, but I agree with some of the other comments - book title! Just increase the overall size a bit and it would work.
againstbound
nice
tiffffany
gawdd this is soo cute
goodbyeskyharbor
Make it the title of the book, and omit the bubble
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azukar
Agreed. No bubble - makes it look like Death's reading out loud.
Maku-chan
I think it's perfect how it is, people generally won't get enough time to read it if it's written on the book and I think the O on the book makes it clear he's reading aloud. It would be different if there was nothing on the book.
Sanguinity
Adorable. I agree with the above comments on changing the comment to the title of the book though.
bgonzalez
Title on book. And I kow its a style, but the book looks just a teeny tiny bit too off kilter, with the larger front and smaller back. Maybe make the diff a little less? I know, i'm knit picking.
PauloAccioly.
print, print!
deadlywhisper
i love your designs.
and the expressions.
Pierce Sharp
Fantabulous art, but the grim reaper has no fear of fractures, this logic both confounds and infuriates me.
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