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 reincarnation factory
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This might even look better on a brighter color, like blue or yellow.
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LOVE this idea. Wish the animals were more visible at a glance, but hey. Really nice.
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I love the idea but it could have been better executed, I think. 4
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yeah...I hope I get the oportunity to submit this again...thanks for the comments though :)
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walla
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FRICKINAWESOME on Apr 09 '08 Super great happy funtime awesome idea, but this needs some major work in the execution department. Maybe with just the top part and not the city, and just a sign that says "Reincarnation Inc" or something to get that point across?
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good concept
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If you like this design but you're not shure about it....I made a new version...If it wins Ill send the new one to threadless!
thanks http://www.threadless.com/submission/158901/Reincarnation_Factory?streetteam=elcucu |
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i checked out your new version, and i do like the color and placement better. however, i don't think you need the words (esp. to label each room). great concept, though; i'd definitely buy the new, blue one.
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I like the new version, I didn't like the black shape at the bottom or the pillars of smoke/clouds on the first version. I agree though, the words aren't necessary.
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this is the new design!
If it wins Ill send the new one to threadless! And the words on the shirt were my mistake...they were not supposed to be there... :P |
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http://www.threadless.com/submission/158901/Reincarnation_Factory?streetteam=elcucu
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a bit busy
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I love the idea.
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thhis is the new design, if you like it...vot for ths one!!
http://www.threadless.com/submission/158901/Reincarnation_Factory?streetteam=elcucu |
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it's cool, but i don't like the clouds on the to, i like the factory bit
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i liked the factory outline bit, the main drawing, the sideborder clouds
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read my past comments
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love it! 5
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hmmmm elcucu they aren't going to approve that new design. unfortunately you can't submit twice. just give um a heads up though and they will make sure it gets printed on blue.
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ohh :( I hope they do...
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I like the concept a lot! Clean it up a bit more and I'll def buy it!
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I like the idea, and it looks good, but it's not obvious enough what the shirt is about until you read the title, which wouldn't be on the shirt itself. If you could figure out how to fix that, i'd buy it.
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love the idea, however i believe the background is far to saturated and needs more pureity.. maybe a bright yellow or pink
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Like the idea, but not the design...
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ndstillie on Apr 15 '08 great idea. you should go back and spend a lot of time on this one in the critique forums and get it right. the idea is a winner
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Interesting concept, just colors and overall bad-drawing...ness. 1
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