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placement placement placement. get rid of the crazy pill penitentiary and put them on the chest smaller. also don't like it on purple, not enough contrast b/w that and the black outlines. think grey or another light color. check out MP(3) or Nuts!. Don't get me wrong, I think it's hilarious. Would totally buy it after those things were changed.
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Agree about the contrast, but I actually prefer them running along the bottom seam, it works for me!
Also think having the crazy pill penitentiary on the sleeve would perhaps work better. Love it! |
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thanks for the comments everyone, and keep them coming...
this is my first of what i hope to be many submissions, so let me know what you think |
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Needs reworking. EXCELENT IDEA, but the text and its decor looks WAY out of place with the simple sketchy illustration.
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