Tell me what you think.

I would like to refer to this.

I like your work on the kites, but I think you should either refine the lower "cloud" a bit or remove it alltogether.

make more clouds, make them typical fluffy clouds!

why did you refer to tyger tyger? like that design is so 'refined'
dumbass

i suppose that truot hates kites?

and i agree a little, work on the lower cloud more.

Great idea, i'd just like to see the kites match the style of the clouds, not quite in linework but in mood, a bit more sketchy instead of bright as day. Really nice idea tho, and i agree with making more clouds.

i've seen this somewhere,
nice illustration tho

Gorty, it is possible for two pieces of art to have the same subject matter. According to your limited thinking all the shirts on this site that include leaves or trees are referencing eachother which is about half. Also all the renaissance artists were referencing eachother because they all painted people. Its called subject matter. It is possible to use it more than once independently.

are those hands a map of somewhere?
the images seem visually disconnected from each other