This is my first submission. There are a lot of potential variations for this one. Hope everyone likes it!

I like the one on graphite best :D

The colored one doesn't flow very well together, but i like the imagery. Maybe just giving the gun the hint of stell on the khaki shirt, or maybe a burgundy or something a bit darker to bring that out? And perhaps boost the size of the dangerous mind font to double what it is now. Nice work for your first sub.

i tink the design works well on the creme colour. 5$ =)

critique mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/18269/Music_voire

would definitely buy the graphite!
wonderful work million.

Graphite is radder than apples. $5

Ditto. Booyaa.

Thanks for the votes and the comments. I'm sure that if I'm lucky enough to have it selected some of these suggestions can be integrated into the design. My reason for keeping the text on the smaller side is because I thought it best that a person see the design first and give it a little thought. By the time they are close enough to read the text, it will all come together and hopefully make for one of those "wow, good idea" moments.

def graphite. very cool :)

Top one is better in my opinion. the colored one doesn't seem to work together as well.

anyone else reminded of the roots album cover

Monochrome one definitely.

Graphite, for sure. It looks more like something out of an oldschool medical text.

I find the colours a bit harsh, so I prefer the black and white. It has more of that 'Grey's Anatomy' look to it for me. Nice to see a design that is thought provoking, keep 'em coming.

I think it's great!!! I prefer the black and white! 5, $

I also prefer the black and white makes it a bit more classical nature drawing thingy

very kool. in creme

i really like the one on the creme tee, i like it better without color

the creme one is definitely more aesthetically pleasing - and it takes a bit longer to get the joke that way. I like the subtlety.

I'm not big on wearing gun imagery but it's very clever - I don't think the coloured works @ all though.

no color.

Clever - looks great in monochrome.

Yeah, needs monochrome. But I have a

.....dinosaur!!!^