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SueAnnaJoe
The bee sucking the honey from the flower. The flower turning into the bee, thus the striped patterns. And the bee's wing transforms into a leaf. So 'To Bee One'. Haha.

Though without the description, not sure if it's strong enough, even more so, without colour. Hmm.

Would be interested to see the print done using 'Puff'. Not sure if it's possible with such sketchy details?

Anyways, please do crit. Would love to hear your opinions. My second submission to threadless.
Veronica61
Veronica61 on Apr 07 '08
I love the concept, but i do think color would help show what's happening ♥
SueAnnaJoe
SueAnnaJoe on Apr 07 '08
Veronica61:

Thanks. I'm thinking so too. I will definitely try to do a colored version.
its_me_alaya
its_me_alaya on Apr 07 '08
the flower is too hard to make out... colour would prob help though...
heyjonmorgan
heyjonmorgan on Apr 07 '08
I think it'd be really cool in color. I just didn't know what was going on without the explanation.
bluepeacechick
bluepeacechick on Apr 07 '08
This is really creepy. I don't know what the bee is doing.
Maku-chan
Maku-chan on Apr 07 '08
needs color I thought the hornet was getting munched by a lizard at first.
audioiv
audioiv on Apr 08 '08
I agree with its_me_alava, the flower is the hardest thing to make out.
skitlbug
skitlbug on Apr 08 '08
I like the co-evolution link....but even as an entomologist..it's hard to tell what's going on here...maybe color the flower or the bee.
lovechuck
lovechuck on Apr 08 '08
yea, it took me a while to figure out what was going on in the design. colour would definitely help.
3 days later
SueAnnaJoe
SueAnnaJoe on Apr 12 '08
Thanks for the input everyone. Most definitely need to have color, and perhaps work a bit more on the design. Seems a bit too hanging, doesn't have that flowish
SueAnnaJoe
SueAnnaJoe on Apr 12 '08
(lol, accidently clicked on the post comment a bit too early)

As I was saying, doesn't have that flowishness to it. Perhaps some more elements here and there surrounding the bee? Hmm.

Anyways, thanks again everyone!
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