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Birds and the world below them

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The Romulans
The Romulans on Apr 05 '08
Needs something else? Too abstract?
Crotch of Thorns
Crotch of Thorns on Apr 05 '08
heahh very cool thought
coolsan
coolsan on Apr 05 '08
i didn like the red dart sort of thing
cookiespluscream
cookiespluscream on Apr 05 '08
haha i thought this was quite smart =)
L-87
L-87 on Apr 05 '08
very very good!
Chengui
   Chengui on Apr 05 '08
Knew I'd seen this idea before. It's a far side cartoon
Wrkhorse
Wrkhorse on Apr 05 '08
needs a wing or an above the bird shot. i had to look back at the title to tell what it was saying. i thought it was a sniper thing.
Wrkhorse
Wrkhorse on Apr 05 '08
i like the style though
Alpha Ryan
Alpha Ryan on Apr 05 '08
I would totally think this was some terrorist refference without the title.
Bits-N-Kibbles
Bits-N-Kibbles on Apr 05 '08
everyone should have a target and maybe a bird looking down on them on the top left?
emthething
emthething on Apr 05 '08
you would probably get copy right infringement.
turbolucy
turbolucy on Apr 05 '08
i'm a major larson fan and recognized the idea right away
blackstreak
blackstreak on Apr 05 '08
Makes me think of the Target stores too much.. and I'm not into advertising for a large corporation thank you.
DigestDemons
DigestDemons on Apr 05 '08
You wouldnt know what it wa supose to be without the title though
FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on Apr 06 '08
TOTALLY a Far Side cartoon. One of my more favorites from when i was a lil one. Idea rip-off to the extreme!
lisseteb
lisseteb on Apr 06 '08
looks completely livetraced
Telahidrin
Telahidrin on Apr 06 '08
why not have some shadows of birds on the ground
Vic.Alexander.Delo
Vic.Alexander.Delo on Apr 06 '08
creative indeed!!! nice placement and all!! 2 Thumbs up!!

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bluepeacechick
bluepeacechick on Apr 07 '08
I feel like you're sending a message, but I really don't know what especially because some are targets and others aren't.
Art Amelirae
Art Amelirae on Apr 08 '08
interesting perspective
EskimoJo
EskimoJo on Apr 08 '08
I like the idea! I also think there should be birds so people know it's not a reference to terrorism - people won't be able to see the tee's title you know!

Also, there should be someone nearby washing a car/or a carwash and the car should have lots of targets on it. Anyone who has gotten birdpoop on a freshly cleaned car will get that.
uZi
uZi on Apr 08 '08
eheheh love the idea! cool job :) $5
white_hat
white_hat on Apr 08 '08
the wrath of gary larson sahll be upon you
quickonejulez
quickonejulez on Apr 10 '08
i think it would look better if you had a bird or two above the people
nintendofan
nintendofan on Apr 10 '08
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paulieboy
paulieboy on Apr 11 '08
looks too much like its promoting target stores. a pretty big chain throughout australia
Andrew Geddes
Andrew Geddes on Apr 11 '08
Looks like the benefit fraud posters you get in UK
Cheddar Bearer
Cheddar Bearer on Apr 11 '08
Haha it does resemble the benefit fraud poster. Maybe if you commit benefit fraud birds will poop on you. Good t-shirt but it could use some indication of a bird.
Fawful667
Fawful667 on Apr 11 '08
Great idea, hilarious! But you'd have to explain it to passerby, given that there's no malicious-looking bird anywhere on the shirt.
ideleon
ideleon on Apr 11 '08
This took you what; 15 minutes on the computer?
katmckeon
katmckeon on Apr 11 '08
You'd need to add a bird.
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