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holy goodness i need this. I LOVE THAT SONG. $5. $5. $5. $5.
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It took me a while to understand what's going on in this image. It kind of blends in the middle.
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I think you need a lighter shirt color, ideally a green between the two greens in the design. Super nifty other than that. :)
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Cyoot.
Love the colors. |
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Yeh I like the concept and the lyric but it hard to see
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good idea but i think it could be better illustrated
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haha story of my life...reminds me of dr. suess or something.
$5. |
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i agree with greta, great idea, illustration needs more
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"story of my life"
I often crawl from window to window too. Good design, brighter shirt would be lovely. |
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Great idea from a magnificent song, needs more definition, though.
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FRICKINAWESOME on Apr 02 '08 Reminds me of the first song off the Arcade Fire's album "Funeral." Just needs to be bigger and some of the major details of the concept brought out or re-drawn to draw more attention to them.
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FRICKINAWESOME on Apr 02 '08 Oh, you already said it was about that song. I just noticed that. lol. Well, way to communicate that idea to me just through the picture...i hadn't even noticed the name of the sub!
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I really really like the design and the colors!And you just made me curious about the song..
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Just wanted to say I've been really enjoying the crit, guys! Link to the song's video, above.
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he shud be digging a tunnel to her window and she should be climbing the chimney to meet him in the middle, the middle of the town.
Since theres no one else around we let our hair grow long and forget all we used to know, then our skin gets thicker from living out in the snow. sorry i think the idea is great but it needs an ickle redesign. |
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i didn't get it until i looked at it on the model.
then i saw an elephant and a person. then i realized they were digging, so idk. but now that i get it, i love it! |
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cool design but the moon up by the collar looks weird. would also like to see this on a diff colored shirt,
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Great! I love that song. The only thing I would change is to maybe make it a bit less complex.When I first saw it, I thought the house to the right was pointing a gun at the one on the left, lol. It is easier to see when you look at the model, though.
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god it looks like winter in valdez
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great! 5
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love the colors, love the moon, such a great idea.
i do agree that it needs to be tidied up a bit, i had to study for longer than the usual couple seconds to get it. your drawing style is awesome, just a little too heavy for shirts on this particular sub. (in my humble opinion) |
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I love love love this!
I think you get it by now about the colors though, but yeah: just needs to be defined a little more. It's such a great idea, and if it gets cleaned up, I'd buy it in a heart beat! Like, switch the greens. Make the shirt lighter, and the rooms darker and have like...a gray defining line about the snow. :D |
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NEIGHBORHOOD ONE!
I WANT THIS! I am now listening to the song. |
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awesome idea but i think it needs a little more work. some of of it just blends together maybe some more colors to make it pop or some extra detail?
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Arrow08 on Apr 05 '08 with the amount of snow I've seen this year, I can relate. Not the most detailed drawing , but it looks great on the tee!
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way too busy, don't want anyone staring at my chest for this long.
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man, this is so funny. it actually kinda looks like that in Quebec city right now. my house is almost completely covered with snow (we got 530 centimeters of snow this year!), so I really could dig a tunnel from my windw to my neighbors' window.
Arcade fire are great! vive le Québec |
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Looks lik Jar Jar Binks is submitting to Threadless these days. Mesa no likey likey.
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