This is my first submission, it's all about this guy made of *Arial type that's falling with a big smile and leaving a trace of letters.

I will appreciate any kind of comment. thank you!

I love the design, and the concept, but it'd be 10 times as cool if the letters weren't masked to fill the figure, but instead finished... Either way, good stuff! 5

Nice work, my boy! $5

i agree with poly, finish the words and its fantastic, still cool though

absolutely fantastic!

very cool :)

Agree. Very cool, but needs to be readable. And not just the same sentance shifted on by a couple of letters over and over.

thanks for the comments and the suggestion about the text. i will certainly do as you said.
the "sentence" is actually made of the first verses of a song that i like very much and is kind of complementary to the design if one happens to know it already.


can anybody guess wich song it is?

On the grey!!! 5$!

Bright Eyes - The Bottom of Everything

not that i know them that well though...

nice concept!

i love the trail of letters & that's cute how the words are song lyrics

veeery nice

cool and all but could use some revisions and different colors

I really adore this concept, and love the lyrical choice, but would have to say that the stark white of the skin really takes away my eyes from the rest of it, as well as the boldness of the text. What if the text desintegrated as it went up into gray (or small dots?). As for the skin, perhaps shaded and more of a prominant skin tone would make it look a bit softer?

Fantastic work!

Keep at it - This is a great concept!

This is pretty original, like it

Nice graphical style
off centre might have been a better placement!