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Different placement... probably lower. I'd change the font also, maybe handwritten, so it doesn't look like an advert for a company. Good concept.
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The placement OWNS. It has great flow! The paper looks like it was made of clay. I like the torn paper edge. This sort of design would fare well sold on an environmentalist site.
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the placement would be odd for girls.
maybe on the stomach? i'm not really sure, but i realy like it. |
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