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Afromation
Afromation on Mar 24 '08
You are sick with the skills $5
slaterock
   slaterock on Mar 24 '08
so gorgeous. so gorgeous. $5.
berrynoir
berrynoir on Mar 24 '08
This is lovely. I love the fluidity of the image - the elongated tail, the doppelganger positioning of fox and crow and the little details like the rushes in the background.
radiostaticstar
radiostaticstar on Mar 25 '08
very, very nice! 5$
atomic child
atomic child on Mar 25 '08
yea dis goooood
BlameTheSuburbs
   BlameTheSuburbs on Mar 25 '08
Cool to see you use your style with such different subject matter.
Pixtoons
Pixtoons on Mar 25 '08
Ray, you are the king of Crow Mountain!.. er, Fox Mountain! ;)
Andreas Mohacsy
   Andreas Mohacsy on Mar 25 '08
colours
helo
helo on Mar 25 '08
that bold black line around the fox really makes it pop in the foreground

( can you tell I've been watching some of your videos ? )
Freyanator
Freyanator on Mar 25 '08
I like it but what the heck is with the falling cheese?
Jackanapes mk.II
Jackanapes mk.II on Mar 25 '08
It's from one Aesop's fables, Freyanator.

And this is awesome. $5!
polynothing
   polynothing on Mar 25 '08
$5 lovely!
SteveOramA
SteveOramA on Mar 25 '08
darn you ray frenden with your easy-to-use flash presentation and great design!
WanderingBert
   WanderingBert on Mar 25 '08
Awesome! Colours are great.
beesneak
   beesneak on Mar 25 '08
Beautiful work!
xiaobaosg
   xiaobaosg on Mar 25 '08
very cool~!!
olie!
   olie! on Mar 25 '08
Stylish, Ray. Very stylish.
I wish I had read Aesop's Fables, 'cause I don't really get the falling cheese thing otherwise. Good job on this.
madruga
madruga on Mar 25 '08
I don't get it, but it's a sick design you have in there! very nice!
aperobic
aperobic on Mar 25 '08
Very nice and awsome made!!!
bsmana
   bsmana on Mar 25 '08
gorgeous indeed.
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 25 '08
It's a from Aesop's fable about the fox and crow:

A fox once saw a crow fly off with a piece of cheese in its beak and settle on a branch of a tree.

"That's for me, as I am a fox," said Master Reynard, and he walked up to the foot of the tree.

"Good-day, Mistress Crow," he cried. "How well you are looking to-day: how glossy your feathers; how bright your eye. I feel sure your voice must surpass that of other birds, just as your figure does; let me hear but one song from you that I may greet you as the Queen of Birds."

The crow lifted up her head and began to caw her best, but the moment she opened her mouth the piece of cheese fell to the ground, only to be snapped up by Master Fox.

"That will do," said he. "That was all I wanted. In exchange for your cheese I will give you a piece of advice for the future:

"Do not trust flatterers."

I tried to post it in the description, but I think the form didn't accept blockqoute html tags.
KnitMongrel
KnitMongrel on Mar 25 '08
This is stunning, and thanks for posting the fable. I'd forgotten that one. :) $5 for sure.
Laser Bread
   Laser Bread on Mar 25 '08
nice -5
Maltzmania
Maltzmania on Mar 25 '08
love this
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 25 '08
Thanks, peoples!
steven218
   steven218 on Mar 25 '08
good job ray. you really went all out on the presentation didn't you dude?!!

5'd
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 25 '08
Steven, I have a much better presentation storyboarded out. I just haven't had a chance to do it yet!
suceda
suceda on Mar 25 '08
great work Ray! love your linework, very fluid $5
weirdpoopoobaby
weirdpoopoobaby on Mar 25 '08
Fantastic illustration... I'll always remember that fable now. (Of course, I'll remember it even better when I have it on a t-shirt...)
suzbot
suzbot on Mar 25 '08
I think the music note looks out of place, and isn't really needed. Other than that though, very good.
0Jim0
   0Jim0 on Mar 25 '08
I hope you left your pants at home; because there are going to be a lot of people stroking you @#&$. I hope that people give you an honest response.

I think it's a great design; but it's not really working for me on the shirt, I think it would make a much better print. it's very bottom heavy and some of the details would be lost in the folds of the shirt. The only other issue I have is the size of the tree (bottom portion vs the top portion) and thats just me being critical.

Like I said, great illustration; but better as a print!
Raid71
   Raid71 on Mar 25 '08
Great illustration, love the story behind it
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 25 '08
Thanks, Raid!
willypiva
willypiva on Mar 25 '08
nice! 5$!
Edword
   Edword on Mar 25 '08
cool!
SoulfumeInc
SoulfumeInc on Mar 25 '08
so awesome dude! loved watching your video for this, it came out great! $5
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 25 '08
I should probably post a link to that, eh? Heh.
lunchboxbrain
lunchboxbrain on Mar 25 '08
print! 5
alvarejo
   alvarejo on Mar 25 '08
wich software did you use? Illustrator? It doesn't look like Illustrator
alvarejo
   alvarejo on Mar 25 '08
and $5 by the way!!! terrific
shirtflirt
shirtflirt on Mar 25 '08
*waits for mr domino to comment*

effin awesome! and sweat presentation to boot.
sonmi
   sonmi on Mar 25 '08
yesyesyesyes
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 25 '08
Alvarejo, my blog has a bunch of videos on using Manga Studio. I really like it's inking tools. Akin to using a real brush and ink!
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 25 '08
I can't wait for our collab, Sonmi!
sonmi
   sonmi on Mar 25 '08
me neither!! i'm brainstorming dinosaur-related themes right now.
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 25 '08
Me too!
akamundo
akamundo on Mar 25 '08
Great presentation and I'm loving the content...reminds of being a kid. Nice.
phones
phones on Mar 25 '08
yowsers!
Harfangoria
Harfangoria on Mar 25 '08
The music note is totally appropriate. Everything's perfect. Plz to not change a thing kthxbai. $5
againstbound
againstbound on Mar 25 '08
greatness
chelly
chelly on Mar 25 '08
that's some crazy-good presentation and self advertising
Mr Rocks
   Mr Rocks on Mar 25 '08
Nice work dude.
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 25 '08
Thanks, dudes!
hey_barn
   hey_barn on Mar 25 '08
Superb style man!
Pizazz
Pizazz on Mar 25 '08
It is up! hurrah!
indeed, it is beatiful
jstumpenhorst
   jstumpenhorst on Mar 25 '08
beautiful work ray!!!
dacat
   dacat on Mar 25 '08
Top-notch $5
shakethesheets
shakethesheets on Mar 25 '08
that's a crazy long foxtail! I love it, though I would have liked to see it on a model... as 0jim0 said, it looks really nice flat here, but I wonder how it would actually look on a shirt.
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 25 '08
It looks fine on a shirt!

Thanks, for the kind words all.
StickChick
StickChick on Mar 26 '08
print. $5
Synthetics
Synthetics on Mar 26 '08
Love it.
pandasbox
pandasbox on Mar 26 '08
I adore Aesop's Fables! (As well as amazing graphics!) $5
Sunshine69
Sunshine69 on Mar 26 '08
the only thing I would change is the music note. Crows don't really have a beautiful song, it's more of a screechy "Caw" sound. Otherwise I love everything about this.
WhitneyBeth
   WhitneyBeth on Mar 26 '08
fantastic as always. $5.
snow day.
snow day. on Mar 26 '08
phantastic $5
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 26 '08
Sunshine, if you read the fable, the crow's "song" is directly related.

Thanks, all!
freckleshoes
freckleshoes on Mar 26 '08
fab fable design. i award 100 bobbins
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 26 '08
That's a lot of bobbins!
ExplosiveThreads
ExplosiveThreads on Mar 26 '08
What a lovely design! =3
franx
   franx on Mar 27 '08
finesse job!

the link you posted showing it on an actual shirt looks fantastic! the flat one doesn't do it justice.

very very nice.
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 27 '08
My future templates will have a photo too. Just to make things clear as possible.
bcrider
bcrider on Mar 27 '08
LOVE. $5

This was one of my favorite stories; I believe Richard Scarry also illustrated it in one or more of his books and this brings back memories!!!
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 27 '08
Richard Scarrey is my favorite kid's book author (okay, disclaimer: he's the only one I know).

I was obsessed with his little animals as a kid.
oneitis
oneitis on Mar 27 '08
nice :)
fairycake
fairycake on Mar 27 '08
I don't understand the cheese...!!
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 27 '08
It's explained in the comments. It's from a fable by Aesop.
Cooger8
Cooger8 on Mar 27 '08
love this, but the presentation is too complicated
its almost a website in itself
lovemoni
lovemoni on Mar 27 '08
i lovvvve that story!! i love aesop's fables actually.. more, you should design more! i love it! $5
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 27 '08
I plan on making an art book if not more shirts. I love the fables too. Even the obscure ones that don't get repackaged for children.
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 28 '08
Any thoughts on the presentation? I see a couple of people think it's complicated.
shirtflirt
shirtflirt on Mar 28 '08
im not quite sure how you could make the presentation any easier or user friendly, really.
angelito
angelito on Mar 28 '08
Yes please. And navigation is easy.
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 28 '08
Okay, cool. I tried to make the icons match the existing Threadless UI. I was hoping that a minimal number of buttons and a help screen would quell all naysayers.
ladykat
ladykat on Mar 28 '08
Sweet! Great colors & linework.
SoldierofGondor
SoldierofGondor on Mar 28 '08
The presentation is really well done. Same goes for the design. 5.
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 28 '08
Okay, cool. I am working on a lossless gradient mesh for the background of the presentation. It will better simulate the image (a movie clip of the design) against a shirt.
Sunshine69
Sunshine69 on Mar 28 '08
I have read the fable. I thought she sang a loud "caw". The note makes it look like she's actually making music.

I watched your video and thought it was very interesting.
jean_warhol
jean_warhol on Mar 28 '08
love the way you color. Love the background too, great work
Bisparulz
   Bisparulz on Mar 28 '08
wow, very well done. 5$
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 28 '08
Sunshine, I chose to show the crow reveling in her own delusion. Individual perception vs. the collective unconscious. That sorta thing.
Sunshine69
Sunshine69 on Mar 28 '08
a jagged speech bubble might make it look more like a screechy sound. sorry to nag. Overall, I love this design, the movement is really great and the triangle between the crow, the cheese and the fox's head is great... your eye just moves from one to the other seemlessly and you take in the whole story.
Sunshine69
Sunshine69 on Mar 28 '08
I just realized that I was still harping on my own idea after appologizing for doing so. just feel free to ignore the first sentence in my comment above.
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 28 '08
That was my goal. I had to make the line widths on the fox really thick to give him appropriate visual significance. Similarly, the crow's total blackness helps her contrast with the background, lending her importance. The cheese kind of fills the visual gap between them and, hopefully, the receding width of the tree and the speed lines help lead the eye the right way.

I like criticisms! Quickest way to learn.
kiLLyou
kiLLyou on Mar 28 '08
LOVE

$ FIVE $
Merzi
Merzi on Mar 28 '08
Awwww, i have always loved that story! Great job, it looks amazing! Wonderfully done!
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 28 '08
Merzi, thanks. I've always dug that story as well.
Lilac trees are for clouds
Very awesome!
taintedluvv
taintedluvv on Mar 29 '08
Beautiful! It's so fluid $5
Batty1980
Batty1980 on Mar 29 '08
Gorgeous design! $5
transparentman
transparentman on Mar 29 '08
I can't believe people didn't know about this... it's good 4$
nezbit
nezbit on Mar 29 '08
Now this is Cool -- Amazing style! 5$
Great color. I love the Crow. Wow!
nikolina100
nikolina100 on Mar 29 '08
Whoa!! This is crazy good!!! $$$ 555 really beautiful!
SoldierofGondor
SoldierofGondor on Mar 29 '08
Its been said, but I'll say it again, it always looks nicer when you display the design on an actual shirt. This looks really nice on the shirt.
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 29 '08
I'm revising my templates in a few ways. :)
BrandonB11
BrandonB11 on Mar 29 '08
good stuff 5
Sanguinity
Sanguinity on Mar 30 '08
OMG yes! At first it made me think of Chaucer, with Chanticleer and the fox, then I suddenly went 'cheese? Aesop!'
Finally a tee I can make all my lit buddies jealous with.
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 30 '08
Heh, awesome, Sanguinity!
roadkill3d
   roadkill3d on Mar 30 '08
Fables=New Black 5 all around.
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Mar 31 '08
Ah. The final push to the sun.
alvarejo
   alvarejo on Mar 31 '08
PRINT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Apr 01 '08
Yay. My highest score yet!
bcrider
bcrider on Apr 01 '08
Wait - the ONLY children's author you know??? We must meet so we can discuss the wonderfulness of Shel Silverstein, then. Granted, he's really more of a children's poet... Ah, well.

I still want this to print. Then I will force my children to wear it while I recount the story. Bwuahahaha.
Edword
   Edword on Apr 01 '08
nice score!!
Pixtoons
Pixtoons on Apr 01 '08
So, Ray... how did you create this wonderful Flash file? You actually have time to ActionScript AND draw?! You're... you're... not human!
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Apr 01 '08
Yeah, I made it. :)
SoldierofGondor
SoldierofGondor on Apr 01 '08
Congratz, nice score.
fatheed
   fatheed on Apr 01 '08
Yeay! Nice score, Ray
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Apr 01 '08
Thanks. I wasn't sure, so I started checking what other shirts have scored. I think this ain't that shabby.
courtney pie
courtney pie on Apr 03 '08
not a bad score at all! ^5
igo2cairo
igo2cairo on Apr 05 '08
Congrats on the sweet score! Missed this, but a belated 5$. Wonderful design, looks like a must-print.
39 days later
bcrider
bcrider on May 14 '08
BUMP

PRINT!!!
106 days later
nallukka
nallukka on Aug 28 '08
My word, I wish this had been printed... it's lovely, has elegance and a great meaning, and happens to use my have color combination-orange and purple-with the perfect accents of green and a great hue of brown as well.

I hope they wise up--not like 2.7 is exactly shabby!
Ray Frenden
   Ray Frenden on Aug 28 '08
Thanks! I dig this one a lot, truth be told.
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