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I very much like the blue. If it were red it would detract from the heart and you would lose a little of it as well.
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maybe a light green would be better than the light blue, because it would still contrast with the red heart, but look better :D
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I agree with khraene. Love the design, but the light blue does nothing for it. I'd prefer a dark burgundy or something. Maybe brown? IDK. Great artwork. Keep it up.
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I posted another Critique up, if people could give me some advice on it and my previous critique it would mean a lot to me
http://www.threadless.com/critique/17286/Spastic_Semi_colon |
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cool I/O, on/off concept for a heart; i think tribalfire makes a good point. if that part of the graphics changed to fit the whole concept better, i would buy it!
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i like this. i dont like the white tribal graphics though. it kind of stifles an otherwise cool design.
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I like this very much. I would change the colors, though... With different colors, I would wear this.
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About my design
this is loosely based off an old album cover I designed for a band that was never used. the concept was still awsome so I ran with it. Originally I penned the heart then vectorized it. when it comes down to in in life, every thing is either 0 or 1