What the Cluck
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1532 days ago
Submitted on:
Mar 17 '08
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Average score:
2.08 from 1,564 votes
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Is this supposed to wrap around the side(s) of the shirt?
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a red balloon? why do they always have to be red?
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Chengui on Mar 17 '08 I would suggest that you put it one a different color. But, I love the illustration.
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Chengui on Mar 17 '08 "on" a different color, sorry.
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fantastic chooka
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First of all, thanks for the critique and positive feedback. I orignally wrote something to go with this pointing to a larger version on deviant art, but it seems to have disappeared.
Link here: http://jaz999.deviantart.com/art/What-the-Cluck-tshirt-design-76457607 Hm... about the red balloon. The colour seems to appeal to humans. Also it's to cut down on colours -I think brown or yellow balloons may get confused with eggs. What colour would you suggest (for balloon and shirt)? I do have one free colour left, or the possibility of changing the shirt colour. |
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First of all, thanks for the critique and positive feedback. I orignally wrote something to go with this pointing to a larger version on deviant art, but it seems to have disappeared.
Link here: http://jaz999.deviantart.com/art/What-the-Cluck-tshirt-design-76457607 Hm... about the red balloon. The colour seems to appeal to humans. Also it's to cut down on colours -I think brown or yellow balloons may get confused with eggs. What colour would you suggest (for balloon and shirt)? I do have one free colour left, or the possibility of changing the shirt colour. |
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jublin on Mar 18 '08 ha nice one! it looks great
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I like the colors. There is something classic about a red balloon.
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Chengui on Mar 18 '08 I would suggest, one of the browns. If you can get one that works for the chicken that knocks out another color too!
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The red balloon works well with the rooster. The shirt colour... my gut says dark brown.
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dont know why but this makes me laugh. nice job!
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the cloud kind of looks like the United Kingdom to me, and i think it sort of draws attention away from the very well drawn rooster that is apparently floating via balloon
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I'm confused about that large yellow mass... Perhaps a less complicated cloud? Then the shirt colour could simply be the colour of the sky- blue, yellow, whatever.
I'm still gonna rate it high, because it's awesome |
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Is a great desing, the shirt color could be blue, yes, i think so... good luck!
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Totally cute. I'd wear this.
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just the chicken get rid of the background
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Yup, the cloud is no good. It would be nice to see your actual intended placement on a shirt.
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nice; i love kfc ;)
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different color shirt but i like the red balloon i think you should leave the balloon red. Maybe on the brown shirt though. I like the design though.
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I like the little floaty clouds trailing behind him, gives a sense of how high up he really is. And the red balloon works.
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the color of the shirt is awesome,dont change it ^__^
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I don't get the positioning, but I think the idea is awesome! Made me laugh, 4$
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haha wat the cluck funny:P
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jillustration on Oct 15 '08 this is actually quite good. i'm surprised it scored so low.
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Agreed. This is a great design. I have noticed a lot more of the original and unusual designs don't do as well as they should. I also think the colour works well. Great stuff.
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