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What the Cluck

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Mar 17 '08
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2.08 from 1,564 votes
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captainbicep
captainbicep on Mar 17 '08
Is this supposed to wrap around the side(s) of the shirt?
organicly
organicly on Mar 17 '08
a red balloon? why do they always have to be red?
Chengui
   Chengui on Mar 17 '08
I would suggest that you put it one a different color. But, I love the illustration.
Chengui
   Chengui on Mar 17 '08
"on" a different color, sorry.
dampapparel
dampapparel on Mar 18 '08
fantastic chooka
jaz999
jaz999 on Mar 18 '08
First of all, thanks for the critique and positive feedback. I orignally wrote something to go with this pointing to a larger version on deviant art, but it seems to have disappeared.

Link here: http://jaz999.deviantart.com/art/What-the-Cluck-tshirt-design-76457607

Hm... about the red balloon. The colour seems to appeal to humans. Also it's to cut down on colours -I think brown or yellow balloons may get confused with eggs. What colour would you suggest (for balloon and shirt)? I do have one free colour left, or the possibility of changing the shirt colour.
jaz999
jaz999 on Mar 18 '08
First of all, thanks for the critique and positive feedback. I orignally wrote something to go with this pointing to a larger version on deviant art, but it seems to have disappeared.

Link here: http://jaz999.deviantart.com/art/What-the-Cluck-tshirt-design-76457607

Hm... about the red balloon. The colour seems to appeal to humans. Also it's to cut down on colours -I think brown or yellow balloons may get confused with eggs. What colour would you suggest (for balloon and shirt)? I do have one free colour left, or the possibility of changing the shirt colour.
jublin
   jublin on Mar 18 '08
ha nice one! it looks great
rosalarian
rosalarian on Mar 18 '08
I like the colors. There is something classic about a red balloon.
Chengui
   Chengui on Mar 18 '08
I would suggest, one of the browns. If you can get one that works for the chicken that knocks out another color too!
dQuarters
dQuarters on Mar 19 '08
The red balloon works well with the rooster. The shirt colour... my gut says dark brown.



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cowhateration
cowhateration on Mar 19 '08
dont know why but this makes me laugh. nice job!
Bio-bot 9000
Bio-bot 9000 on Mar 21 '08
the cloud kind of looks like the United Kingdom to me, and i think it sort of draws attention away from the very well drawn rooster that is apparently floating via balloon
monotolang
monotolang on Mar 21 '08
I'm confused about that large yellow mass... Perhaps a less complicated cloud? Then the shirt colour could simply be the colour of the sky- blue, yellow, whatever.



I'm still gonna rate it high, because it's awesome
Nicte Kono
Nicte Kono on Mar 21 '08
Is a great desing, the shirt color could be blue, yes, i think so... good luck!
Hinargaa
Hinargaa on Mar 21 '08
Totally cute. I'd wear this.
carob_calamari
carob_calamari on Mar 22 '08
just the chicken get rid of the background
plastic_atomic
plastic_atomic on Mar 22 '08
Yup, the cloud is no good. It would be nice to see your actual intended placement on a shirt.
sassquash
sassquash on Mar 22 '08
nice; i love kfc ;)
doughboybenny
doughboybenny on Mar 22 '08
different color shirt but i like the red balloon i think you should leave the balloon red. Maybe on the brown shirt though. I like the design though.
miss.mac
miss.mac on Mar 23 '08
I like the little floaty clouds trailing behind him, gives a sense of how high up he really is. And the red balloon works.
Decayedstemma
Decayedstemma on Mar 23 '08
the color of the shirt is awesome,dont change it ^__^
merryduffer
merryduffer on Mar 23 '08
I don't get the positioning, but I think the idea is awesome! Made me laugh, 4$
GreenRaider14
GreenRaider14 on Mar 24 '08
haha wat the cluck funny:P

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jillustration
   jillustration on Oct 15 '08
this is actually quite good. i'm surprised it scored so low.
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grina001
grina001 on Nov 12 '08
Agreed. This is a great design. I have noticed a lot more of the original and unusual designs don't do as well as they should. I also think the colour works well. Great stuff.
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