I like the phone with outline...lose the other part. Or, lose the outline and make the whole thing smaller. The illustration styles are too different to work as one cohesive design. Something has to go, then it would seem more polished...
I love the way it's rendered...likewise with the concept. I wonder if it would flow better with the telephone reversed, though, so that the cord would go into the wires almost. Just a thought, very nicely done. :)
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