trying something a bit more simple...tell me what you think

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i like this attempt much better than your last. ::2.75::

i think this style can really work but needs different placement, make it bigger shift it right somemore. You're already going for messy so no need to wack it in the middle otherwise it kinda looks like the scribbly style wasnt intended

I don't get this at all.

maybe I've been brainwashed by freshman drawing, but I dig sketchy concepts. nice :)

PhantomSteve02- thank you for your comment, good to know i'm improving...

wick- yah i really was having trouble with placement here, i tried enlarging and shrinking and none seemed to work...but you're absolutely right, thanks much for your idea, i will take it into consideration!

martha1- this idea is simple, the words "working hard" and the sketch of the two people working are made into one unified work. thats it, hopefully you get it now?

carly- thanks so much for your positive comment!

i like it.

work harder?

i'll try to work harder than "red dot," oh wait! i did. next time be constructive.

i would hate to wear this cuz i'd have to keep explaining it to everyone, but it wouldn't really be worth the effort.