Threadless T-Shirts - ClownFish ?

ClownFish ? by tillou

Scoring finished:

209 days ago

Submitted on:

Mar 12 '08

Scored by:

1,598 people

Comments:

17 comments

Final average score:

1.90 out of 5

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by tillou

Dear Staff, this is my 3rd sending ! Sorry, I'm pretty clumsy...This one is the good one...hopefully...
Dear Threadless Community, I'm a newcomer, this is a little design for your kids...

Icepyro on Mar 12 '08

made me smile :) nice first sub.

id like it on, not purple

tillou on Mar 13 '08

thanks icepyro ; I simply took a fancy to the purple/orange matching ! take care : )

lickpink on Mar 13 '08

this is really good
but i think it should be more centered on the shirt

Atomic K on Mar 13 '08

very funny.

tillou on Mar 13 '08

I wanted the little fish in the middle (on the plexus), but why not bigger and more centered...

tillou on Mar 13 '08

ps : thanks guys !

asona on Mar 13 '08

thats cool

i am newcomer too..
please comment my design
http://www.threadless.com/critique/16680/Keep_Up#v2

alanscottevil on Mar 13 '08

I love the fishes but something's not working with the arrangement/setting

Robin.NJ on Mar 13 '08

Its not balanced on the shirt. Its too heavy on the right side the little fish doesnt offset the visual weight of the big purple fish.

I like the idea though and am glad you chose purple !

tillou on Mar 14 '08

actually I agree with your critics. so I could make it bigger, more centered (the tail of the bad fish on the sleeve), but the little fish can't be bigger than is "fellow" ! thanks, for your feedback...

heppi2002 on Mar 15 '08

i like the imbalance in the composition. great t-shirt - i'd buy.

edean on Mar 15 '08

i liked this better when it was in the critiques and had one clown fish throwing a pie at the other one's face...

kikakid on Mar 15 '08

I actually like it pushed to the side, provided the big fish is close to the same color of the shirt. Not so much visual weight that way, and all the contrast is in the middle.

Nice idea.

tillou on Mar 16 '08

thanks for your nice comments : )