Film Forest
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Mar 11 '08
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I actually kind of like this concept except for the fact that the film doens't seem to flow with the tree too well. I think you should try to make it look more like the film becomes the tree. It might also be interesting to have trees on the frames of the film or something else on them, but then again that might just be too much.
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Cute idea but the tree to film could flow so much better.....keep at it....*smile*
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i agree, the film needs to flow a little better into the tree, on the left side in particular. i really like the colour choices and the concept; well done branches as well! adjust this a little and i'd definitely buy it :)
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the film needs to integrate into the tree better, then I might think about it.
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If the film was integrated better with the tree, I might have to wear this shirt every day of my life.
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i agreee with everyones comment, as well as maybe making some variety in the trees instead of just scaling down the exact same image
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same as every body and there should be pictures on the film
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FRICKINAWESOME on Mar 12 '08 I agree, make the film flow better, or even make the whole tree from the curving film stock, and just use a single graphic for the center.
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i think everything need to be a little more flowish, it's all a bit awkward
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Arrow08 on Mar 12 '08 seems everyone has the same opinion on this one. I do agree with the film integration I think it looks real nice on the actual shirt example though!
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Yes, make the film flw more into the tree. Also, it might help to do that if you make the film the same color as the trees.
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thanks everyone for the feedback
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wow, this is great! I would buy this for sure!!! $5!
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Sweet!
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I like the design but I'm not sure it's a marketable concept.
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Is there something to get? Why film and why forest?
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Not really, I just thought it was a cool combination of objects. If you really need a deep meaning, I guess you could say creativity can be a source of life, or a way to feel alive. Or not, haha
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i like the idea, although im not quite sure what its all about :/ the colours are great but yes i think you somehow need to merge the negatives with the trees more, otherwise it would definately be something that i would wear :)
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maybe make the outline of the film the same as the color of the trees
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I love the concept and the colors, but maybe different trees, and slightly different looking film for each one, perhaps coiled differently or different in some other way.
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this is sweet! i really like the way you fused the two ideas together! I kinda wish they weren't just in a straight line though but other wise neatoooo
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If you could blend the two together so they had rhythm in their convergence, i would click the "i would buy" and rate five, i'm sure everyone else thinks the same.
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I agree with the others, the film breaks off from the tree completely and really makes it hard for the flow of the design, which it seems you are trying to capture from the look of things. Keep trying though, you're on the right track.
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tree to film could flow better like they said, BUT i'd buy it the way it is cause i like it:D
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I disagree with the idea of putting objects on the negative, although I can see how that could add more to the design. I think the blank screens are particularly metaphorical, however.
Ditto to the flowingness. |
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