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i like it. i dont love the color though. i dont know i guess it could be me but i like dark colors
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yea, 1 should be Drink some booze to calm you, or something along those lines ..otherwise its ok, it reminds me of the Fight Club airline card..
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very funny. the sentences could definitely use some work..
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i love this soooooo much but am worried about the copyright, did you design all the images yourself? I'd totally wear it, specially if you made the plane into a repeat pattern, oh yeh!!
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I think the sentence structure enhances the design! LOL!
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I'm not sure if I like the bad sentence stucture or not...I guess it makes it seem more like a bad japanese translation...so in that case, i dig it...
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Leave the sentence structure, It would lose it's charm if it was perfect english.
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So.. we both fancy safety cards!
hope see your tee over here! good luck |
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I love airline safety cards, but this is too complicated. one cell from the card might work better...
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'White powder bag to inspire' made me snort.
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^ *rim shot*
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I do like the "Engrish" aspect, but as a whole I think the humor is kind of flat.
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absolutelt brilliant... 5$
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Love it.
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hogboy on Mar 08 '08 this guy already did something similar:
http://www.threadless.com/submission/103247/Mile_High not accusing you of any sort of copying, just a heads up to be prepared for the incessant "Reminds me of Fight Club" comments. |
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Karnaf on Mar 08 '08 hogboy : thanls for the advice i haven't seen this one but it's definitely not the same idea, same support (emergency card) but for me a really different way !
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ROFL. LOVE IT!!!!
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awesome
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You should probably throw a design in the critiques if you're worried about your sentence structure. However, in this case the not-quite-right English is cool, it's like you're on a low-budget, foreign airline.
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I have to admit I travel alot and this is possibly the most amusing take on those damned safety cards I've seen so far. + 5
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Get someone to rewrite all of the text and you might have something.
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haha this is wonderful
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Karnaf on Mar 11 '08 Thanks for your comments and support, could you please help me telling the sentences needed ? O_0
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amazing
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sentences could be more like
"the overhead compartment will fall, drink some booze to lighten the mood" "breathe deeply into your baggie of glue found above your compartment" "find the bag of fine white powder beneath your seat, it is sure to inspire" "and now you can fly!" "have a nice flight" |
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Haha this is the silly, lighthearted comedy Threadless needs! 5!
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Karnaf on Mar 11 '08 thanks genuinefake26 but you don't have anything shorter ?!!!!
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As an English teacher the wording needs some serious work.
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I don't agree with genuinefake's sentences (no offense), making them too grammatically correct would take away from the shirt. I think the only change in words needed would be on the last one, instead of "you don't risk anything anymore" you could just say "don't worry".
But again, the sentences are fine the way they are. |
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I like the bad english. Definitely "cheap foreign airline" style
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I gotta have this shirt!
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