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Deep Sea Dreams

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Mar 05 '08
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2.37 from 1,645 votes
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by ZoeChen
ciottin
ciottin on Mar 05 '08
i love meduses
Corinthian Leather
Corinthian Leather on Mar 05 '08
I just saw a tv show about jellyfish in Australia. Beautiful, but deadly!
Ryaku
Ryaku on Mar 05 '08
Woooooo~ jelly fish very nice :D
Lorcan Dragonskull
Lorcan Dragonskull on Mar 05 '08
I like the jellyfish, but I don't think you really need the dreamer.
careface
careface on Mar 05 '08
very, very well done.



I think if you put a bit more detail in the person and the cigarette it would make it even better.



but either way its awesome. $5
ZoeChen
ZoeChen on Mar 05 '08
The smoke is rising slowly, the jellyfish are floating. She'd like to stay in the deep sea, dreaming.
kik.da.sneak
kik.da.sneak on Mar 05 '08
dude.

i love jelli's.

basically you are awesome!
chul
chul on Mar 05 '08
love the jellyfish, but i wouldn't buy it because of the smoker
ratatouillelvr
ratatouillelvr on Mar 05 '08
i agree w/ chul
ZoeChen
ZoeChen on Mar 05 '08
Quister told me this in critique:

"Take of the smoker.....it distracts the focus from your design."

I agree with quister now. But I still like this smoker. Since she gave me the inspiration and I saw the quality of tranquility. That's why I didn't take the smoker off. Although it will lower the score. But I'd like to be honesty to myself instead of please everyone.

CF Li
CF Li on Mar 06 '08
I hate jellyfish. I got stunk by jellyfish and became allergic to sea food. But love the design though. Go Go Zoe Go.....
nie
nie on Mar 06 '08
well, the smoker kills it.
strange ranger
strange ranger on Mar 06 '08
I love love love the jellyfish, but smoking is a huge turnoff for me. Too bad, I would definitely buy it without the smoker.
Rahna
Rahna on Mar 06 '08
Agreed. I was excited and ready to vote $5, until I finished scrolling down to the smoker. :(
careface
careface on Mar 06 '08
the smoker definitely adds to it.



otherwise it would just be some (neat looking) jellyfish
Heyjohnny
Heyjohnny on Mar 07 '08
Reminds me of one of the Shins shirts
LadyLyd
LadyLyd on Mar 07 '08
i don't like the smoker either. but if the smoker were taken away it would need something in it's place. i think also, the smoker is just to plain. most of the jellies are defined by solid colors and the smoker is defined by just lines...
mborhani
mborhani on Mar 08 '08
"That's why I didn't take the smoker off. Although it will lower the score. But I'd like to be honesty to myself instead of please everyone."



power to you!

I think the smoker is fine, I don't see how it detracts aesthetically just because people are disgusted by smoking.



whatever. maybe if it were a huge ass j it would change their opinion.
LutePlay
LutePlay on Mar 08 '08
Still hate jellyfish after getting stung.
tinymouse
tinymouse on Mar 08 '08
I actually kinda like that the smoker isn't as well-defined as the jellyfish..it's as if her dreams are more vivid, and more beautiful than real life.
tinymouse
tinymouse on Mar 08 '08
Although I'd like it slightly better if it was placed on the right...
DShawn
DShawn on Mar 08 '08
so cool
Doobidoob
Doobidoob on Mar 09 '08
Their is some talent here. Good Job.
lindseymcdd
lindseymcdd on Mar 09 '08
Jellyfish are one of my biggest phobias, but I still love this shirt.
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tazz_
tazz_ on Apr 26 '08
The smoker looks contemplative the smoke transforming into psychedelic jellyfish symbolize the deadly habit smoking is. Deep! I like it. 5!
tazz_
tazz_ on Apr 26 '08
Oops scoring was over long back!
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gnattse
gnattse on Jul 20 '08
Hey Zoe. I agree with one of the earlier comments. I think there should be more detail put into the person and the cigarette. Otherwise the design is really great. I like the style of the line work in your jellyfish. You may want to also consider varying the shape of them a little more since in real life, they are a lot more irregular. gnat
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