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i like it but the thought bubble bothers me.
it should go to the right its not the right style... maybe more square or bigger ? |
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Chengui on Mar 04 '08 I'm not quite feeling those gradients. I agree with you wanting to ax the boxyness. I can't think of a much better way, but I feel like the gradient is conflicting with the sharp linework of the illustration, which is beautiful by the way.
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love it!!!!! awesome!!!
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fantastic concept, and it would look perfect if it weren't for those gradients.. Is it possible to let the stripes go all around?
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lose the bubble, id love it on yellow! nice design!
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olie! on Mar 04 '08 why are people complaining about the thought bubble? It looks like it's not on the actual shirt, at least on the one to the right. This is awesome, by the way.
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i LOVE this!
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YES! good concept.
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fatheed on Mar 04 '08 Cool! IMO, lose the fade - just have it stop dead. Boxy can look good if the design is largely geometric like this one. Also - I pick no bubble/text! $
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Love it, great idea. I dont like the thought bubble though.
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ouhhh i want to see the rest of these girl body hihihi =$$$
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I'd keep the thought bubble, get rid of the fading stripes.
5$, this rocks! |
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lofty softy on Mar 04 '08 that's really fantastic
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love it!
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a thought for your gradient issue – just stop it dead like fatheed says, and maybe put a box around it, comic strip style. your design has a real lichtenstein feel to it, so i think a comic strip element could work nicely. nice work, regardless.
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You could lose the thought bubble and it would still work great.
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neat!
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yea yea, dig it w/o the bubble
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no bubble
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you're coming up with some cool ideas.
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I would make the stripes going all around.
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ir0cko on Mar 04 '08 looks great in yellow!
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way cool!!!!
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This is great $5
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KDLIG on Mar 04 '08 simple but cool $5
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Hell Yeah i'd wear that! Classic post partial style with a hint of consertivitism that makes it smokin'.
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Just awesome
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love it!!! $$$$5
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ginetteginette on Mar 04 '08 i think this is the most ingenious striped shirt design i've seen ever. along with most others, my only qualm is the gradients at the sides though i would assume that was just your way of fitting it on the shirt.
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I don't think the bubble is actually on the shirt. I really like it.
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YES! I want this! No bubble. $5
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Nobubble.
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love it very modern but the bubble is just to obvious needs to be a little more subtle get rid of it
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roadkill3d on Mar 04 '08 Fantastic on lemon or probably gold for a more retro feel! $5!
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This is very similar to an old shirt you can see here: http://ima.dada.net/image/medium/186649.jpg
I think you drew the blinds much better but I wish they covered the shirt more, like they do on the other shirt. No thought bubble, please. |
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Wicked!
Holy crap balls it's awesome!! I must own it. |
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FRICKINAWESOME on Mar 05 '08 No thought bubble and it's purrrfect! I was thinking of making a collab where a guy was looking through one of those old school 1920's clubs slide doors for their eyes only and asking for a password, but that's kinda the same idea you have here but yours is much much more awesome! Great work....4$
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jasmintee on Mar 05 '08 Alright guys, no bubble then :). Thanks for all the feedback! I agree that a wrap around design would be awesome, but I don't think it's possible.. unless a belt print on both sides but it would probably be too complicated to match the stripes.
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wow!
so wonderful! $5!! |
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Montro on Mar 05 '08 Nicely drawn! Loving the concept.
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ndstillie on Mar 05 '08 really good!
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vbarnhart on Mar 05 '08 great t-shirt design...no bubble.
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i love it :] definitely no bubble and i'm not really hip to the fade. $5 though without the bubble, and since you've said you'd take it off $5 is what i'm giving. ;]
$500 without the fading, bahah. |
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mezo on Mar 05 '08 Very effective! I love.
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I like it either way, with the fade on the stripes or without. 4$
Delete the bubble. |
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delectable
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Wicked!! $5... No bubble, I agree.
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Looks great! But, I'm not digging the gradient either.
What about using half tones on the side? I think it would give it a better "comic book" feel and can fade out in a shorter distance and look better. |
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oh my god i want this! badass, this reminds me of those old comic books, i agree with rubberducky you should use halftone dots on the sides to make it fade into the shirt $5555555555
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I'd definetely buy it if it didn't have the text.
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awesome shirt, for sure.
i'd buy it without the thought bubble, definitely. |
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Monkey III on Mar 05 '08 I also saw a similar shirt in a store.
I know cause I have a shirtdesign based on that one. I dunno if I will complete it now. I also have blinds (different) and a girl (photograph). What to do ... :( |
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Personally, I don't really like the thought bubble... I think it looks a lot cooler without. The gradient doesn't mind me all that much, but if you changed it, I would say just go to the seam, not all the way around. |
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Wonderful!
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hellyah man 5$
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I agree with whoever said the lines should not fade out. But that's my only concern. Great work!
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i know very little about art on Mar 05 '08 Clever!
$5 |
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jasmintee on Mar 06 '08 Hey Monkey I'm not surprised other people have come up with the same concept while playing with the idea of a striped tee... you should just submit yours and explain that we were working on them at the same time. I know how you feel though.. I've had a couple of shirt ideas already sketched out when someone has submitted a really similar concept here, so I've just ended up not finishing them...
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Monkey III on Mar 06 '08 Same here jasmintee^^
It happens alot in a place like this. I usually leave it that way too. All the best! |
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Quite striking! Without the bubble I like it.
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d3d on Mar 06 '08 cool. better without the bubble.
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nice one.....easy and beautiful...
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Great! ^5!$
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i want it
and if they don t i ll print it myself!!!! 5$ |
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roadkill3d on Mar 06 '08 aaalman on Mar 06 '08
i want it and if they don t i ll print it myself!!!! 5$ BEWARE jasmin! Don't post hires version :-P |
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sweeeeeet, no thought bubble
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jasmintee on Mar 06 '08 For the people who don't like the gradients, here's a version without them - check it out
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i like it, and the thought bubble is a nice idea, but the content of it is kinda of cheesy. Lovely design though.
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You should do the blinds using the belt printing technique. This way it can go all around the shirt. Well, it's just an idea
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no bubble,
and very kickass!!! i'd wear 3 of them at once! |
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ya kissass!
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Wow wow wow! I really hope this gets printed! I'll buy one the second it comes out.
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iThew on Mar 07 '08 I love this idea and the design! great work!
definetly like it without the gradients |
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Brilliant!!
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Andy Mason on Mar 07 '08 since it is only one color, you should definitely make it a belt print and have the stripes go allll the way around. without going all the way around, the whole idea of a striped t-shirt is not as good.
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This is definitely a shirt that would look great layered under a jacket.
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WhitneyBeth on Mar 07 '08 oooh. stripes going all the way around would be awesome. but i would honestly buy it how it is. $5.
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jasmintee on Mar 07 '08 Yeah, Andy Mason, I mentioned earlier that a wrap around belt print would be cool but probably not possible, as matching the stripes from front to back might be kind of complicated... I dunno
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love it!!! caption or not, it is awesome!
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Really slick concept!
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very creative! i'd sure as hell wear it!
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nice! no bubble.
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Very edgy! Nice job.
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Much better without the bubble, great design!
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that's so amazing.
$5 |
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I agree- no bubble. great!!!!
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- No fade on the stripes
- No thought bubble (with those changes...) I want to be wearing this right now. this is such a GREAT idea!! $500,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000.01 |
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so simple and pretty! $5
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i like this. i think if you got rid of the gradient... it would look nice. if youre worried about 'boxyness' i would say to do something like a connected zig zag type of thing... all in all beautiful work. $5
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this is acutally really really really cool
5$$$$$ |
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I like the thought bubble. It'd be nice if you could get the lines all the way round the shirt but I'm not sure how possible that is print wise.
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hardcore sh*t
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put it on a bright color
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tesco on Mar 10 '08 rad! definitely no thought bubble
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I like it without the thought bubble, and perhaps use a different technique on sides of horizontal lines rather than a gradient. very nice design
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really great but i`m not sure if the bubbles actually fits with the whole shirt.
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Wow, great score man... Hope this gets printed, It shouldn't be to hard for them to do.
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jasmintee on Mar 13 '08 yayyy, my best score so far! Thanks everyone!
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igo2cairo on Mar 21 '08 Somehow I missed this. Totally cool! Looks like a print to me.
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i'd buy it in an instant
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roadkill3d on Aug 06 '08 Print?
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ive seen this in stores already.
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it was a photo of a person though.
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Wow... been looking at your past designs. You got a lot of designs that need to be printed. :O
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Big print with gradients on the sides, to avoid the boxyness.