Training Purposes
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Submitted on:
Mar 03 '08
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ginetteginette on Mar 03 '08 it's a bit strange how what's supposed to be paper posted on a shirt has such a strong shadow yet 3-d rendered objects are just glued to it like paper.
i think this needs to over all have the same feel. that tape recorder and that microphone, for what you're going for, need shadows |
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the design isn't working for me, but this would make such a great slogan. submit it as that.
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its a great idea...i agree with prexis...slogan?
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I work for Sprint so I really like the idea--In the critique I said something about losing the mic--most tape "recorders" would have that function built in, so the microphone needs to go. I agree with ginette on the rendering.
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In the design on my sketchbook I had the note as a piece of card taped to the shirt - but all the people I asked said that the post-it note made it look more fun. Kinda like a girlfriend had left a note for her boyfriend...
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ginetteginette on Mar 03 '08 i get the post it note, my comment was mostly regarding the supposedly 3-d objects of the recorder and microphone. if a thin slice of post-it paper makes a shadow, wouldn't the other two items also create shadows?
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cool idea, but the microphone looks wonky
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another example of a good idea with bad execution.
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I think the recorder needs shadows
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nice idea, could be done abit better?
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I agree with ginetteginette
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What is it with the need to stick hearts in every design. (Okay, I'm exaggerating, but still.) But I agree, nice concept, but it really could have used a couple weeks in the Critiques. The microphone is too big, and the recorder too small. And maybe put an asterisk on the microphone so that "may be recorded..." is like a footnote with the "small print" in it down near the bottom edge of the shirt.
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anyone know if I can pull it down and stick it back into critiques?
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tobiasfonseca on Mar 05 '08 Nice idea!
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this definitely has potential. If only there were some way to put in the ubiquitous headsets all of us tech support geeks wear ... it's also a great slogan idea!
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haha very funny. love it!
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Sounding a bit like a broken record I know but the concept is really good, the design needs a bit of work tho! The head of the mic looks a bit exagerated and the recorder and mic look a bit too 2-d! great concept tho!
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ginetteginette on Mar 09 '08 you don't have to pull it down, just submit it to critiques and work out all the kinks before re-submitting this
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i agree. love the concept, probably wouldnt wear this incarnation of it though.
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